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Fan Creations / Re: Super Mario Bros X: The Great One

« on: October 15, 2005, 02:49:33 PM »

(The next chapter. Return of an old video villian and see what Waluigi does when he thinks Wario's gone)

On the ship, everyone was having a good and relaxing time, except for Luigi who still suffered from seasickness.

Wario: Somebody get a mop.

Meanwhile, Yoshi was Mario about the clue he found.

Mario: So whoever this Great One is, he doesn’t sound like a good guy.

Just then there was ringing. It was coming from Mario. He pulled a Game Boy Horror.

Yoshi: You took that from your brother?

Mario: No. He gave it to me just so he wouldn’t be able to throw up on it.

Mario turned on the Game Boy Horror and it was E.Gadd on the other line.

Mario: Hello professor Gadd. What is it?

E.Gadd: Well I’ve done some research about this so called Great One.

Yoshi: But, you’re scientist not a historian.

E.Gadd: Don’t tell me what I am or am not young man. Anyway it seems that this Great One was infact the very first King of the Koopas. But something happened, he mysteriously vanished. I’ll gather some more facts. Good luck on finding the Crystal Stars.

Mario: Okay.

Mario shut off the Game Boy Horror.

Yoshi: Hey remember that child Koopa who you threw the garbage truck?

Mario: You mean, Jr. Troopa?

Yoshi: Yeah. What ever happened to him?

Meanwhile on the other side of the ship, Wario was sitting and relaxing on a chair reading a TV Guide and Waluigi was pretending to be a hobo.

Waluigi: Why am I doing this again?

Wario: So I can pay off some of the damages done to my castle. And you still need to pay rent.

Waluigi: Can you at least get out of that chair and me?

Wario: I’m not getting out of this chair.

???: MMMMMMMAAAARRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIOOOOOO!

Waluigi turned around to find Jr. Troopa standing behind him.

Jr. Troopa: Where’s Mario?

Waluigi: Why do you care? Go away I’m busy. And there’s nothing you can do to tell me.

Jr. Troopa grabbed the chair Wario was sitting on.

Wario(not noticing anything): I’m not getting out of this chair.

Jr. Troopa used his strength he somehow got and threw the chair clear off the boat with Wario in it. But Wario was still reading the TV Guide.

Wario(still not noticing anything): No sir. Not getting out of this chair.

Waluigi was amazed. At Jr. Troopa’s strength and Wario’s idiocy.

Jr. Troopa: Now tell me where Mario is!

Waluigi: Okay just hold this for a moment.

Waluigi pulled a cherry and gave it to Jr. Troopa.

JrJr. Troopa: What the heck are you doing carrying a cher….

BOOM! The cherry was in fact a bomb. Jr. Troopa was blow clear off the boat.

Waluigi: Glad that brat’s finally gone. But so is Wario.

Waluigi just stood at that spot for some. Then he started jumping up and down for joy.

Waluigi: THAT MEANS I DON’T HAVE PAY NO RENT! I NOW OWN THE CASTLE WITH EVERY TREASURE IN THERE! AND THAT MEANS I’M THE OWNER OF WARIOWARE INC! WOOT!

Waluigi then started doing the Macarena. A teenage Koopa saw this and was shocked.

Koopa: I just lost ability to see.

A child Bob-omb was happy because she got a new teddy bear.

Bob-omb: Nothing can bring me down this time.

She saw Waluigi doing the Macarena and then she started crying and ran away. Then Luigi saw Waluigi doing the forbidden dance. But he pulled out a camera.

Luigi: This is just too good to pass up.

Luigi took the picture and left without Waluigi noticing. Then a man, who looked particularly odd, saw Waluigi.

Odd Man: Hey you?

Waluigi: What?

Odd Man: Are you doing the Macarena?

Waluigi: Yes.

Odd Man: Can I join you?

Waluigi: Sure why not.

Then Waluigi and the Odd Man started doing the forbidden dance together. Meanwhile on DK Island, Cranky Kong was in his laboratory making new potions.

Cranky Kong: Maybe if I somehow manage to make smart potion for my son.

Just then Klus entered.

Klus(thinking): Now to use old hatred for my advantage.

Cranky: Who are you Koopa?

Klus: My name is Klus.

Cranky: What do you want?!

Klus (obviously lying): I just wanted to meet the original Donkey Kong.

Cranky was flattered even though he tried not to show it.

Cranky: If that’s all, then SCRAM! It’s bad enough there’s Goombas who started appearing on the island.

Klus: Well I’m also here because of another thing. I, Klus, have forsaw the future of your island.

Klus then projected an image of DK Island in flames.

Cranky: THE HECK!

Klus: Yes and it is all because of this man!

Klus then projected an image of Mario.

Cranky(pure hatred): Him!

Klus: Yes, he also brought allies with him to start the destruction of DK Island.

Cranky: Well I must inform my son about this.

Klus: Do not worry yourself, legend of Kongs. I will personally tell your son about this.

Cranky: Good here’s a picture of him.

Cranky gave Klus a potrait of Donkey Kong.

Klus: I thank you very much. You sir are truly the Legend of the Kongs.

Cranky: No thank you. You proved that some cold-blooded creatures aren’t cold-hearted.

Klus: I’ll drop by later to hear about your stories.

Klus left with a victorious smirk on his face.

Klus(to himself): Just pay the old coot a complement and he trusts you faster than a child. Now where is the DK Jr.

Meanwhile on another area of DK Island, DK was hanging with his friends, Diddy, Lanky, Chunky, and Kiddy. Diddy however was depressed.

DK: Don’t worry. We’ll find a way to save Dixie.

Diddy: I sure hope so.

Lanky: I know what would cheer you up in the mean time. Hearing one of DK’s stories about the time he beat up the kings of other lands.

DK: You can just me King Kong.

Everyone laughed except Diddy.

Chunky: Diddy still upset.

Diddy: Sorry guys, I’m just not in the mood.

Just then, there was a rustle in the bushes.

DK: Who’s there?

Back on the boat, the Odd Man and Waluigi were just finishing the Macarena.

Waluigi: That was great Mr.

Odd Man: Fatman

Waluigi: Fat man?

Odd Man: Not fat man, fatman. Lord Harry Fatman.

Waluigi: Well ciao.

Waluigi left. Just then Fatman’s cell phone went off and he answered.

Fatman: Hello. (pause) I was just dancing. (pause) The Macarena. (loud gibberish) It is a great dance. (pause) Yes I’m still aware about the mission. (pause) Yes, I’m still aware a Crystal Star is on the Island of the Apes. (pause) Don’t worry, I’ll get the star and then leave. Over and out.

Fatman put his cell phone away.

Fatman: Man he’s been acting more impatient lately. Well time to find the Crystal Star.

On another part of the boat Mario was in deep thought. Yoshi was curious.

Yoshi: What’s wrong?

Mario: Oh, nothing.

Yoshi knew better. He knew all about of Mario’s adventures even the earlier, darker ones.

Yoshi: You’re afraid that DK’s father is still mad at you.

Mario: Is that so wrong? I thought I did the right thing back then.

Yoshi: Saving your old girlfriend from King Kong poser was the right thing to do. Getting revenge on that poser is the wrong thing to do. I’m surprise you and DK became friends and didn’t kill each other.

Mario: Yeah, me too.

Yoshi: And of course you were only eighteen when that happened. DK Sr. was like forty eight back then. Fifteen years later, DK Sr. became on old man. So if he bothers you I’ll hurt him.

Mario laughed.

Mario: You don’t know how to respect you elders do you?

Yoshi: I’m just a rebellious teen. So sue me.

A few minutes later, the boat made it to DK Islands the heroes got off.

Mario: So Geno, you said that you and Mallow were heading to town to find clues about the Crystal Stars.

Mallow: That’s right. The locals should know something about somewhat.

Mario: Okay. See you guys later.

Geno and Mallow headed towards town.

Luigi: Um. Where’s Wario?

Waluigi(guilty): Uh. You know that’s like asking “Where’s Waldo?”.

The remaining heroes found Wario on the shore still on his chair and still reading the TV Guide.

Mario: Wario.

Wario(not noticing still): Not getting out of this….(becoming aware) Wait a minute. How did I get on DK Island? Where’s the boat? Did I get caught up reading the TV Guide again.

Mario and co. sweatdropped at Wario’s ignorance. DK Island wasn’t a bad place. About the size of Australia, it houses mostly Kongs, as well as other hybrid, jungle animals. Most of the houses were made of wood. But that’s expected when you lived in a jungle island. There’s not much metal or brick.

Yoshi: You know, I’m surprise with all of these sentimental species running around in our world, there aren’t many hate crimes.

Mario: I’m surprised by that too. I’m also surprised that the natives here are starting to compete in Mushroom Kingdom’s sporting events.

Mario and friends kept walking until they found DK’s house. They entered DK’s house. And were greeted by DK and his friends.

DK: Long time no see guys.

Mario: Same here.

Luigi: We’re looking for the Crystal Stars.

Lanky(really fast): Do you mean the same stars created by a demon queen one thousand years ago only to be banished away by four ancient heroes and these stars have an enormous amount of power, as much as the legendary Chaos Emeralds, and whoever found all seven of them can open the Thousand Year Dood and get the legendary treasure, but in fact the legendary treasure is the ancient demon queen, and the actual treasure is nothing more than a Dried Shroom, now collecting the Crystal Stars will help you in other stuff. Are those the Crystal Stars you’re talking about?

Everyone sweatdropped.

Luigi: Um, yes.

Lanky: Cool! Can we help?

Mario: Sure. We need all the help we can get.

Yoshi: By the way, what’s a Chaos Emerald?

Lanky: I don’t know.

DK: You guys go ahead. I need to talk to my friends. Err. I mean my Kong other friends.

Mario and co. left the Kongs for some privacy. DK pulled out a walkie-talkie.

DK: That Mario fool have just invited us to come along on his quest. He has no idea.

It was revealed that Klus was on the other side of the walkie-talkie.

Klus: Excellent. Play along. And then, when there are no witnesses. Eliminate them.

DK: Yes master.

Suddenly, all of the Kongs’ eyes turn blood red. They were brainwashed by Klus!

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Mario Chat / Re: Nintendo DK or Rareware DK

« on: October 03, 2005, 08:30:38 AM »

I don't think Rare messed up the storyline. I heard somewhere that Mario just graduated from high school during the Donkey Kong Arcade saga. Donkey Kong had a son.

Then as Mario grew older, so did the ape and his son. The original DK, now too old to anything, became Cranky. And with DK Jr., all grown up, took off Jr. in his name.

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Fan Creations / Re: Super Mario Bros X: The Great One

« on: October 02, 2005, 11:49:02 AM »

Meanwhile at Peach’s Castle who knows where, Klus was studying something he found.

Klus: Hmm. Hmmmm. WHAT! Henchmen come here!

A Koopatrol and a Hammer Bro came.

Hammer Bro: Yes boss.

Klus: It seems like my plans have taken a slide for the worse.

Koopatrol: What is it?

Klus: Well, it seems as if I need to find these lovely ladies called the Seven Maidens of the Divine

Hammer Bro (dumbfounded): Huh?

Klus: My thought exactly. It seems there are seven of these dames each containing a quality of feminism. Beauty, Adventuress, Elegance, Willfulness, Innocence, Intelligence, and Kindness.

Hammer Bro: How can intelligence count as a female quality?

Klus: Don’t know. But that’s beside the point. If we want to revive the Great One we must kidnapped though girls and the Crystal Stars. By the way how is the success of finding the Crystal Star on Kitchen Island.

Hammer Bro: Uh boss, Mario and his allies got to it. He even defeated that Petey who had it.

Klus: But what about the Black Sugar Pirates?

Hammer Bro: Uh, Mario put a beating them too.

Klus: BLAST! I can’t believe it!

Hammer Bro: Um boss. You’re powerful. Can’t you just wait for Mario and his party to find the Crystal Star and then ambushed him at last mintue?

Klus then breathed fire at the Hammer Bro.

Klus: Don’t tell me what I should do!

Hammer Bro (burnt): Okay (faints)

Klus: Now about the Seven Maidens. Hmm. Bring me Princess Peach and that other girl we’ve captured.

The henchmen left and then moments later they came back with two girls. One being Princess Peach. The other Dixie Kong.

Peach: What do you want?

Klus: Silence! Only speak when you’re spoken to. Now

Klus fell into a deep meditation. When he came to, he found a conclusion.

Klus: You princess is the Maiden of Beauty. And you, you little girl, you’re the Maiden of Adventuress.

Dixie: What are you talking about?

Klus: You two have an enormous amount of light energy in you. And according to this, (he pulled some books he looking at) only the Seven Maidens have that much light magic in them.

Dixie: What are you going to do to us?

Klus: Nothing…yet. Take them away. And I more thing. If they’re harmed in any way, you will lose your head.

Koopatrol: Yes sir.

They left then a Buzzy Beetle came in.

Buzzy: Boss a word?

Klus: Yes, what is it?

Buzzy: It seems that the next Crystal Star is found on DK Island. The Goomba scouts are searching far and wide.

Klus: Thank you. And I’ve been studying that place. It’s run by monkeys and apes. Their arch-enemies are called Kremlings. Good thing I already overthrew that windbag K.Rool. Now with the Kremlings under my control, we’ll wage war on that island. And one more thing, this old monkey known as Cranky Kong. Maybe old hatred for a certain annoyance is what I need from him. And if that doesn’t work, I’ll attack those Kongs.

Meanwhile, Kamek was flying high in the sky on his broom.

Kamek: Just because I have solid transportation doesn’t mean it can last forever. A Goomba scout who betrayed Klus and joined back on our side said that a Crystal Star is on DK Island. Those crazy apes. They did enjoy that “Planet of the Apes” Movies. Both versions.

Then his broomstick began to malfunction.

Kamek: Uh what’s going on. Why is my wand suddenly flashing red. Uh-oh.

Then the broom stop working and Kamek began pummeling toward the sea.

Kamek: I need a RRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kamek fell into the ocean. Meanwhile on Kitchen Island, our heroes were just about to a make their departure. Until…

Wario: We’re coming with you bozos.

Mallow: Why?

Waluigi: Action, adventure….

Wario: Free food treasure…

Waluigi: But most importantly….

Wario & Waluigi: WE’RE NOT PAYING FOR ANYTHING!

Everyone else: YES YOU ARE!

Mario: Alright you can come with us. The more people we have on our party, the better it will be for us to stop Klus. Now let’s see where the next Crystal Star is.

Mario used the Crystal Star he got and inserted in the Searcher 5000. Then it shown another island.

Geno: Another island.

Yoshi: Hey that’s DK Island.

Mario: Good. And maybe DK can help us with our search. Well, back to the boat.

Mallow: Um, we have no boat.

Luigi: And we can’t take the Black Sugar Pirates boat. We might be attacked.

Wario: Why don’t we just used the warp pipe from this island, go to the Mushroom Kingdom, then catch the next boat to ape island?

Yoshi: Wario, that was genius.

Mario: But why didn’t you ever say anything about it?

Wario: How else did you think I came to the Mushroom Kingdom events by swimming.

Mario: Lead the way.

Wario lead the heroes to a warp pipe. One by one they all jumped in. They emerged right into the sewers under Toad Town. They found the pipe that led up to Toad Town. In Toad Town, everyone was a bit calmer after the tragic events of Princess Peach, but they were still afraid. Our heroes made their way to the docks again. Now with no chaos there, the sailors were repairing the damages.

Sailor: What can I do for guys today.

Mario: We need to hitch a ride to DK Island.

Sailor: There’s a boat that takes you there but it will cost 10 coins to ride.

One by one the heroes paid. Except for Wario and Waluigi.

Yoshi: Aren’t you two going to pay.

Waluigi: I don’t have any money.

Wario: I need to worry about my insurance after that Petey fiasco.

Luigi: Fine I’ll pay for you both.

Luigi pulled a Koopa Kredit Kard. And the sailor added the bills to the credit.

Mario: Good thing you have good credit.

They boarded the ship and the ship began to sail away.

Yoshi: I hope nothing bad happens.

Meanwhile back in the docks, an X-Naut was hiding in the bushes.

X-Naut: This XYZ coming in over. Infiltration of ship has been successful. Repeat. Successful ship infiltration. Over.


(this chapter was kinda short.)

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Fan Creations / Re: Super Mario Bros X: The Great One

« on: October 01, 2005, 08:52:43 PM »

(I would like to say thank you to everyone who is reading my story, and I hope more people would read it.)

In Wario’s castle, Wario and Waluigi were being held prisoner. Petey Piranha was on a rampage throwing up on anything that look suspicious.

Waluigi: And I thought you were a fat slob Wario. Why did you two get along so well in the baseball tournament?

Wario: Shut up!

The Wario brothers were immobilized in a puddle of goo left by Petey. Meanwhile, Petey was still searching for the Crystal Star. He checked the area outside of the castle and even went as far as the beach, but he couldn’t find any Crystal Star.

Petey: Fjjhjafjd %%^&& JHVjcdh

Waluigi(at a distance): Watch your mouth.

Wario: How did you know what he said?

Waluigi: Be quiet.

Petey then found something shiny under a desk. He picked up the desk to find that it was a Crystal Star.

Petey(happily): RUH!

But, when Petey grabbed the star it began to shine.

Meanwhile, the heroes finally arrived on Kitchen Island.

Yoshi: Finally! I thought we’d never make it.

Geno: Where let’s get started.

Mallow: What about the pirates.

Mario: Don’t worry about them.

Cut back to the ship to find all of the Black Sugar Pirates in cells.

Random Spearman(tearfully): I want my mommy.

Everyone else: SHUT UP!

Cut back to Kitchen Island where the heroes found that most of the beach would be polluted with goo.

Mario(sarcastically): Now is the perfect time to leave F.L.U.D.D. back at home.

Geno: What happened here?

Mario: My guess is that one of Klus’ minions who’d originally work for Bowser is here.

Yoshi: Don’t worry, I’ll handle this. I might be able to find some clues.

Yoshi ate some fruit growing from a bush and started squirting to clean the mess.

Yoshi: This may take some time. Continue the Crystal Star search without me. I’ll catch up later.

Mario: Okay Yoshi. Good luck.

The heroes left Yoshi with the task and headed for Wario’s castle.

Luigi: What makes you so sure that they even know what we’re talking about?

Mario: They have too. Those brothers are dim but they’re not that plain stupid.

Mallow: Look, more goo.

Geno: Maybe, if we follow the trail, they’ll take us to the culprit.

Everyone agreed and follow the sludge. The sludge led them right up to Wario’s Castle.

Luigi: Umm. I knew Wario was disgusting but even HE knows how to keep a home clean.

Mallow: That’s because it’s Wario’s doing. Look up at the castle’s roof.

The heroes did to find Petey Piranha standing on top of the roof.

Mario: (censored)! What is he doing here? Why does he keep coming back?

Luigi: Why does he wear underwear when he’s a plant?

Everyone turned to stare at Luigi.

Luigi: ….

The heroes began to head up the castle. They found Wario and Waluigi in the second floor.

Wario: Help us… I mean what are you doing.

Mario: So Petey kidnapped you in your own home. Some baseball partner.

Wario: Just get of out!

Geno: Why should we? You’re a thief. And you’re not a very nimble one either.

Then Wario and Waluigi did something no one ever saw them do.

They cried like little babies.

Waluigi(crying): We just want to get of here.

Wario(crying): I just want to make love to my treasure.

Everyone stared at Wario.

Wario: Crud I failed English class in high school, remember. I mean I just my treasure back ‘cause I love it.

Mario: Alright, we’ll get you out just come down.

Wario(calming down): Okay. But can you change me first?

Everyone groaned at Wario’s insanity. Meanwhile, Yoshi was still at the beach still spraying the filth away.

Yoshi(mocking himself): I’ll clean up the mess. I’ll look for clues. I’ll catch up to you guys later.

Yoshi then tripped on something. When he found what he tripped on it was a ball of white light.

Yoshi: Huh?

Beware of the Great One’s return.

He will come to claim, he will come to power.

And he will take all that he desires.

The white light then faded away.

Yoshi: That was weird. Was that my clue I was searching for? I better find the others.

Meanwhile on the roof, the gang arrived to find Petey Piranha dancing around like he did when he first appeared in Sunshine.

Mario: Why do you keep showing your face is beyond me.

Petey(with stereotypical British accent): I could say the same thing about you.

Everyone’s jaws dropped in shock. Petey was speaking perfect English.

Luigi: How?

Petey: Easy by obtaining this.

Petey showed the heroes the Crystal Star.

Petey: With this little trinket I found, it made me more aware. I’ve became stronger. I’ve became smarter. Oh, this Crystal Star that I found. Created by the Shadow Queen thousand years ago. Hmm, hmm, hmm, she knew what she was doing.

Geno: Well, you’re not giving it to Klus.

Petey: Klus? That simple minded fool. I’m still on Bowser’s side of this Koopa civil war that’s just about to began. Klus was just some I’d shrugged when I was still thought of as “mentally challenge.” But I’m not working for Klus, let alone Bowser anymore. With increased intelligence, I’ll overthrow them both. Then I could start a world war. I’ll make a new world, where Piranha Plants are the dominant species. No longer am I’m just some stereotyped muscle headed idiot. I’M SMARTER, STRONGER, BETTER!

Mallow: Uh. This guy’s power hungry. What do we do.

Mario: It could be worse. The roof could collapse. Then a feather from a bird flying by landed on the roof. And as clichéd cartoon moments have it, the roof collapsed.

Everyone: AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone landed in an empty room on the second floor.

Wario: Ah library-study combo.

Waluigi: There’s no books in here.

Wario: SHUT UP!

Petey: I can’t believe I was on your baseball team. Oh well, time to die you fools.

Play Music: Super Mario Sunshine Boss Song

Petey flew up in the air so no one can get him on the ground.

Mario: Man he is smarter.

Petey flew around in circles slowly but surely. He knew he was defeated last time by Mario because he stopped to pause for awhile. Petey fired goo at our heroes. Everyone barely jump out of the way. Petey then landed on the ground

Wario: Oh yeah take this.

Wario did a butt slam on the ground to cause an earthquake. Petey lost his balanced.

Mario: Now everyone, SHOOT AT HIS MOUTH!

Mario, Luigi, and Wario rapidly fired fireballs, Geno used Geno Beam, Mallow used lighting attacks.

Waluigi: I got no attack.

Then he thought of something. He spun around until he turned himself into a tornado. Just like he did in Mario Power Tennis. Everyone stop firing rounds at Petey.

Mario: Now Waluigi!

Still in a tornado attack, Waluigi attack Petey. Petey began spinning around like crazy. When it was over Petey just laughed.

Petey: Even though I admit, your attacks hurt. It only hurt like a poke in the arm. Now watch this.

Petey then spat more goo. The heroes dodged it but the goo hit a chair. The chair then dissolved.

Mario(sarcastically): Great. Now he spits out acid.

Petey: PREPARE TO DIE!

When Petey opened his mouth again…

???: Oh yeah. TAKE THIS.

Petey then received fruit juices right into his mouth.

Petey: (gurgling)

Petey then had too much fruit juice in him and he tipped over. It was Yoshi who fired the juices.

Yoshi: Who said you could start the party without me. Yoshis are known to party

Mallow: Way to go Yoshi.

Mario knew what to do. He slammed onto Petey’s belly. Petey then threw up juices everywhere.

Petey: You may have got once. But it won’t happen again.

Petey then mutated into goo as if he was defeated but he wasn’t. there were now three different forms of Piranha Plants.

Mario: Impossible.

Yoshi: You’d lived in the Mushroom Kingdom for some time now. Anything is possible.

Mario: Split up!

Everyone went their separate ways. Wario and Waluigi ran down one hall with a snake-like Piranha Plant chasing them.

Waluigi: Let’s slow him down.

Waluigi did another tornado attack to make the Piranha Plant dizzy. Wario used his classic dash punch to knock the plant out. Wario and Waluigi were triumph.

Or so they thought. The snake-like Piranha Plant came too and wrapped itself around Wario and Waluigi.

Waluigi: NO!

Wario: AARGH!

Meanwhile, Yoshi, Geno, and Mallow were running down another hall being chased by a roach-like Piranha Plant. Yoshi spat out more juiced but it done nothing to it. Geno fired a Geno beam but the monster dodged it with ease.

Mallow: Wait a minute. It’s a plant…I GOT IT!

Mallow used a blizzard attack to freeze the Piranha Plant in its tracks.

Geno(relieved): Too close.

But he spoke to soon. The spider plant broke from its icy prison. It  fired sticky goo at our heroes and they trapped and couldn’t move.

Yoshi: Oh no!

Meanwhile, Mario and Luigi were chased down another hall with a Siamese Piranha Plant chasing them. It was Siamese because the they were attached at the head. The Siamese Piranha Plant fired goo to immobilized Luigi. However, it was still chasing Mario.

Siamese Plant: I’ll be back to deal with you later.

Mario was running and running until he ran into the end of the hall. Actually the end of the hall was but a hole in the wall. Mario looked down to find that the moat surrounding the castle was too acidic to swim in. He was also too high up to survive the fall if he decided to jump.

Siamese Plant: Now you’ll pay for hurting me/us. After all, I’m/we’re still Petey.

The Siamese Plant then struck. It hit Mario and they all fell out of the castle. However, Mario was lucky enough to grab hold onto the castle. Unfortunately, the right head of the Siamese Plant grabbed hold of Mario’s foot by biting on it. They were right above the acid moat.

Siamese Plant: If I/we go, I’ll/we’ll take you with me/us.

Mario tried to pull himself back up. But the pain from his foot being bite on was hurting him and the Siamese were heavy. Mario then couldn’t hold longer. He began to fall.

Mario: AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just then, a hand grabbed him and pulled Mario back into the castle. The Siamese plants however fell into the moat and dissolved. It turned out that Luigi had saved Mario’s life.

Luigi: Couldn’t let a world hero fall to his doom, could I?

Mario just smiled.

Meanwhile, the others were trapped inside the goo of the remaining Piranha mutants. Mario and Luigi had enough.

Mario: Super Flame!

Luigi: Thunderpalm!

The combined attacks of both brothers were too much for the Piranha Plants to handle.

Piranha Plants: NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The Piranha Plants exploded and everything was covered in goo. Geno, Mallow, Yoshi, Wario, and Waluigi emerged from the wreckage.

Wario: HOW IN THE HECK WITH MY INSURANCE COVER THIS!?

Yoshi: Man that was a doozy.

Mallow: You know, I feel kinda sorry for Petey.

Geno: What.

Mallow: Well it wasn’t his fault. Power just got to his head.

Yoshi: Politics. That’s what it is. And speaking of power, lookie here.

Yoshi showed everyone the Crystal Star.

Waluigi: That’s the Crystal Star?

Mario: So is it alright for us to take.

Wario then did another thing no one else saw him ever do. He said ‘yes’ to let someone else have jewels.

Wario: Waluigi, you’re just going to have to rent another way.

Waluigi: (censored)

Yoshi gave Mario a Crystal Star.

Mario: One down and six to go.

Yes. Mario and friends got one Crystal Star. But where are the remaining others? What is Klus planning. Who’s the Great One? Will anyone else be caught up in this adventure? And What about Princess Peach? As their adventure just started, Mario and friends began to search for the next one.

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Fan Creations / Re: Super Mario Bros X: The Great One

« on: September 24, 2005, 12:59:55 PM »

Play Music: Chapter 5 Intro from Paper Mario 2

The winds were calm, the seagulls were sounding, and the boat was sailing finely. Who wouldn’t enjoy a boat trip.

Luigi: (barfing from seasickness)

I stand corrected.

Mario: Will you relax. There’s nothing bad that is going to happen.

Yoshi: He shouldn’t eaten those sandwiches Mallow packed.

Mallow: I didn’t know he would throw-up because of them.

Mario: Now I checked the Searcher 5000 and it said that the Crystal Star is somewhere inside Wario’s Castle.

Yoshi: You mean we have to go inside that piece of junk?

Mario: Yes.

Geno: I question though. What will happen if they refused to give it to us?

Yoshi: Will just take them by force.

Mario: Sadly, that seems to be the only way. But those two bros. always seems to help someone though.

Mallow: Isn’t Wario’s a pirate. The only reason he would help someone is for wealth.

Yoshi: Yeah, and Waluigi is just you know, there.

Then, the Nimbus sailor was guiding the boat saw something on radar.

Nimbain: Prince Mallow, it seems like there’s another boat right on our boat’s stern.

Mario: I’ll take a look.

Mario got a telescope went to the front of the boat, but saw nothing.

Mario: I don’t see anything. Just the open sea.

Geno: Um Mario, the stern is the BACK of the boat.

Mario(sweatdropping): Er, um.

Mario went to the back of the boat and this time he did see a boat. But it was the boat of the Black Sugar Pirates.

Mario: Guys, we’ve got pirates.

Luigi & Mallow: PIRATES!

Yoshi: Big deal we can handle them.

The pirate ship then started firing cannons.

Yoshi: Okay we can’t.

Mario: Mallow, isn’t there anyway we can fight back?

Mallow: No, this is just a cruise boat.

Meanwhile on the pirate ship. Captain Syrup, the Black Sugar Pirate Leader, was watching the attack on Mario. But she wasn’t enjoying it.

Syrup: This stinks why did I let myself be defeated by some fool.

Then on cue, Klus appeared.

Klus: You do realize that I’ve heard you, correct? Besides you’re doing your job. Raiding other ships to add to your personal wealth.

Syrup: What about the deal?

Klus: As soon as you defeat the fools on that boat then find the Crystal Star on Kitchen Island, I will free you and your pirates. If you fail,

He let the threat hang. Syrup knew what he was talking about. Klus, one day, just came on her ship and started defeating her crew one by one. There was nothing she could do and she surrender to Klus. He spared her, her life.

Syrup: FINE! I’ll do it! Get close to that ship. Board the said ship and capture anyone on that ship.

Klus: And don’t worry. I’ll send backup.

Klus disappeared into thin air. Syrup’s ship moved closer to Mallow’s ship. Mario and friends were prepared to fight.

Mario: Be prepared for anything.

Yoshi: I am so going to like this.

Then a truckload of Spearmen came out of the pirate ship and attacked. Mario and Luigi punched a couple of them. Geno fired a beam to defeat some of them. Yoshi swallowed them one by one. Mallow used quick lighting attacks to defeat them. After that, there were no more Spearmen left.

Geno: That was a so-so training battle.

But then, a cannon fired and hits Mallow’s boat. The boat began to sink into the water.

Mallow(panicking): What do we do?

Mario: We have to board the pirate ship.

Yoshi: Let me rephrase Mallow’s question. What do we do that is REASONABLE?!
Mario: We have no other choice.

The heroes jump from there boat to the pirate ship since it was so close to them. When they got there, there were more Spearmen than our heroes can handle. Some of the Spearmen were gigantic. Some of them were aiming cannons right at the heroes. Captain Syrup then arrived.

Syrup: Well, I’ve done what the King of Koopa couldn’t do. I’ve defeated the legendary Mario as well as his friends.

Mario(sneering): You must be Syrup.

Geno: To be honest, I always thought that Syrup was a man.

Syrup: SILENCE! Guards, take them to different cells in a separated area of the ship. If they try to escape, cut off their heads.

Army: Yes ma’am.

They’ve got the heroes separated from each other. Mario & Yoshi in one cell, Luigi and the Nimbus Sailor in another, and Geno and Mallow in a third cell. In Luigi’s cell it was a messy area. It looks like the area of the ship hasn’t been clean for years. Then a Giant Spearman came in.

G. Spearman: Nimbian, the captain wants to see you now.

The Nimbian sailor left with the Giant Spearman. But the idiot Spearman forgot something.

When the sailor and the Spearman arrive to Syrup she wanted answers.

Syrup: Okay, you fool. Where’s the Crystal Star that’s in Kitchen Island.

Sailor: I don’t know, honest. But if I did, I still wouldn’t tell you, that goes against the sailor’s code.

Syrup: Oh, is that so.

She grabbed the sailor. Then after chanting a spell, a black portal opens up.

Sailor(frightened): What are you going to do?

Syrup: This.

Syrup chucked the sailor into the portal.

G. Spearman: Um, where does that thing lead to anyway?

Syrup: Klus’ lair. Where Klus is waiting for him. Now go get one of the other prisoners and force them to tell us where the Crystal Star is, or they’ll suffer the consequences.

???: NO WAY!

Syrup turned around to find the heroes, escaped from their prisons.

Syrup (disbelief): But how?

Luigi: Your guard left the door to my cell open.

G. Spearman (sweatdropping): Uhmm.

The Giant Spearman ran into the black portal before it closed.

Syrup: The stupid idiot. And we’re almost to Kitchen Island. Klus, I need the backup now you fool.

Play Music: Paper Mario 2 Cortez Battle

Then on cue. Three Giant Metal Spearmen appeared. Then Syrup began to escape. The powerful Spearmen charged at our heroes. Mario tried into hit one but it hurt his hand.

Mario: YOUCH!

Mallow then performed a lighting attack to damage one of the Spearman.

Mallow: Their defense is much too high. But perhaps we can take them out with magic attacks.

Yoshi: That means I’m useless.

Mario: You guys fight them while I find Captain Syrup.

His friends agreed and they were on their way. Luigi and Mallow used their thunder attacks to damage one of the Spearman. The Spearman then caused an earthquake on the ship. Luigi and Mallow jumped to avoid taking damage. Luigi used Super Flame to burn the Spearman then Mallow used Blizzard to freeze it. The Spearman’s sudden dropped in temperature caused him to crack wide open and be defeated.

Geno and Yoshi were up against the two remaining Spearman. Geno used Geno beam but the Spearman jumped out of the way. Yoshi tried to use a headbutt, but it didn’t work. Yoshi the thought of something. He came up to one of the Spearman, swallowed him, and spat him at the other one. The attack damage both Spearman. Geno then used another Geno Beam to finish them off.

Mario chased Syrup to the bow of the ship.

Mario: Your pirate days are over Syrup.

Syrup: That’s what you think.

Syrup pulled out her sword. Upon seeing this, Mario pulled out his hammer. The two then commenced to fight. Mario blocked the oncoming attack of Syrup with his hammer. Syrup jumped out of the way when swiped at her. When she landed back down, Mario used Hammer Quake to damaged Syrup.

Syrup: You are strong. That would explain why you’re Wario’s rival. But let see you handle this.

Syrup pulled out a Hand Axe and threw it at Mario. Mario barely dodged it, but it came back towards him like a boomerang. Mario had to backflip to avoid being hurt. Syrup came running up and kicked Mario. Mario went sailing to the wall.

Syrup: Now we can do this three ways. The easy way is surrendering yourself and help me find the Crystal Star. OR you’ll die right here, right now. OR, I’ll send you to Klus right away and I’ll let him decide what to do with you.

Mario then had enough of hearing Klus’ name. When Syrup raised her sword for the finishing blow, Mario did an uppercut on her. Then he’d used a his head butt attack from SSBM. Then last but now least, he used his side smash attack to finish, Syrup. Captain Syrup fainted and Mario and friends won the battle. Mario went up to his comrades.

Luigi: Well, this was some battle.

Yoshi: Now we head to Kitchen Island, with a new boat. Then we’d find a Crystal Star.

Mario: Klus won’t know what hit him.

The heroes were almost to Kitchen Island. And Mario smiled. Sure, he knew Klus was dangerous and he held Peach captive. But he couldn’t help smiling knowing that his closest friends are with him till the end.

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Fan Creations / Re: Super Mario Bros X: The Great One

« on: September 10, 2005, 01:53:12 PM »

Meanwhile, at the Mushroom Kingdom, there was a hospital. In the hospital, Mario, Luigi, and Yoshi were lying on beds unconscious. Yoshi was the first to regain conscious and said…

Yoshi: Hey guys, wake up.

Both of the Mario Bros. open their eyes to find out where they are.

Luigi: Where are we?

Doctor: Why you’re in the Mushroom Kingdom Hospital. The three of you was beaten up pretty bad.

Mario: Who or how did you find us.

Doctor: An innocent Bob-omb found you and called 911 and the ambulance came rushing. You guys ,except for the Yoshi, were unconscious for three days.

Mario & Luigi: THREE DAYS?!

Yoshi: Yep, I regained conscious on the second day. I was trying to wake you guys up but the nurses didn’t want me to do that.

Doctor: Well, it’s time to see if you are healed. You three have looked like you’ve taken a nasty beating from somewhere. It was about the disappearance of Peach’s castle wasn’t it.

The three heroes dropped their heads in shame.

Doctor: Well, don’t worry about it. Let’s go to see if you’re properly ready for release.

After a few x-rays, exams, and the most dangerous of all, shots. The trio was ready to go.

Docotr: Well, it seems like everything is in tiptop order. I’ll be sending you guys the bill later.

Mario: Okay, well see you around doc.

Doctor: Good-bye.

After the good byes the trio found that the city was in shame. Toad came up to them. Yoshi then went back to the hospital realizing he forgot something in there.

Mario: What’s going on?

Toad: It’s terrible! Princess Peach’s Castle has disappeared. She might never come back.

Yoshi came back will a pillow.

Mario: Don’t worry, Toad. We know the plot of the fiend. Some Koopa named Klus is going after the Crystal Stars.

Toad: But you’ve send them to different parts of the world, right.

Mario: Yes. But I don’t know where they went. With the magical map destroyed we have no clue on how to get them back or where to start looking.

Yoshi: YEAH! Another adventure!

Luigi: I’m in. Hopefully, none of us will be killed. (to Yoshi) Are you sure you want….

Luigi stopped speaking when he saw that Yoshi’s head was in the pillow he was carrying.

Yoshi(with head in pillow): This pillow stuffing tastes like choking.(getting head out of pillow) Why does this happen every time I stuff fruit in there? You guys were saying something.

Mario, Luigi, and Toad all just stared at Yoshi as all four of them sweatdropped.

Yoshi: WHAT?

Mario: Well, it’s settled. We’ll go off and find the Crystal Stars.

???: MMMAAARRRRIIOO!

The gang spun around only to find Jr. Troopa standing behind them.

Mario: For crying out loud!

Jr. Troopa: Mario! We’ve never finished our match. This time I’m going to hurt you so bad.

Jr. Troopa came running up towards Mario but Mario grabbed Jr. Troopa and slung him into a garbage can. A garbage truck then came grabbed the can and stuffed the trash and Jr. Troopa in there.

Jr. Troopa(in garbage truck): I will be back. You can count on that. Oh you know, this stuff doesn’t taste that bad.

The truck drove off.

Yoshi: Well. That’s settled. But how are we going to find them Crystal Stars.

???: Perhaps I can be of service.

The gang spun around expecting another villain but it was just E.Gadd.

Luigi(relieved): Oh it’s only you, Gadd.

E.Gadd: I couldn’t help but overhear your predicament. You said you guys wanted to find the Crystal Stars? Well follow me to my lab.

At E.Gadd’s lab.

E.Gadd: I have come up with another invention to help for searches. If it works it will make search Chain Chomps obsolete. I called it the “Searcher 5000”. It’s twice ads better than my Searcher 2500. You just put something that relates with what you’re looking for and then the Searcher 5000 will point you the land you need to go. However, it won’t tell you the exact location and it will only pick up what you’re looking for one at a time.

Luigi: So all we need is to find something that’s Crystal Star related.

Mario: I can help.

Mario then performed the move Sweet Treat. The Searcher 5000 made an alarm go off.

E.Gadd: EGAD! It’s looks like it detected the first Crystal Star. It’s on an island known as Kitchen Island.

The trio groaned in frustration.

Mario: That’s where the Wario Bros. lived. I hope they haven’t found the Star first for our’s AND there’s sake.

Yoshi: Screw them. Let’s just go.

Luigi: Are you coming E.Gadd?

E.Gadd: No. I’m just an old man. But I have one question why does this Klus-character you told me about is after the Crystal Stars?

Mario: It’s something about someone called the Great One.

E.Gadd: I think I’ve heard of that somewhere. I’ll have to investigate.

Mario, Luigi, and Yoshi then left E.Gadd’s lab.

Mario: Let’s go to the docks. Maybe we can find a boat to take us to the Kitchen Island.

Luigi and Yoshi agreed and they set off. When they arrived at the docks, Toad sailors were running away.

Mario: What’s going on?

Sailor: A giant Bob-omb wearing a crown is running a rampage at the docks.

Mario, Luigi, & Yoshi: The Bob-omb King!

When the trio got there they already saw that the Bob-omb King was running amuck destroying. There also was two prisoners in his clutches.

Mario: Geno, Mallow?

King Bob-omb. What! Oh well, well, well. If it isn’t Mario, Luigi, and Yoshi. I’ve been waiting a while for my revenge. And now I going to have it.

Yoshi: Oh yeah. Well, you and what army?

Then an army of black Bob-ombs came out of nowhere.

Yoshi: (screaming like a little girl)

Luigi: You just had to asked.

King Bob-omb: Soldiers. Show no mercy!

The Bob-ombs ran toward our heroes. Mario kept grabbing one and threw it at the others causing them to explode. Luigi kept firing fireballs to make more of them explode. Yoshi then threw eggs rapidly to defeat more Bob-ombs. When they defeated all of the Bob-ombs the King was mad.

King Bob-omb. Oh I’ll show you.

He jump up in the air and caused a shockwave. The heroes jump up in the air to avoid it.

Mario: Yoshi, distract him as we come to him from behind.

Yoshi: Got it.

Yoshi ran up to the Bob-omb King and stuck his tongue out.

King Bob-omb: Are you willing to die inse…AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!

King Bob-omb found out he was being picked up by Luigi. Luigi threw him and he landed on his back.

King Bob-omb: You’ll pay for that little man.

King Bob-omb then threw bomb at our heroes. Yoshi ate one of them then spat it back to the Bob-omb King.

King Bob-omb: ARRGH! That’s it no more games. Time to use the power Klus gave me.

Mario: So you’re working for Klus now, eh?

King Bob-omb then somehow summon wings and flew up high in the air.

Luigi: Mario, none of us can jump that high. What to we do.

Worse, King Bob-omb pulled out a huge purple Bob-omb.

Mario(sarcastically): Oh great. A Bob-ulk.

Yoshi: Their explosion is not SURVIVABLE!

King Bob-omb: See you fools in hel…..heck.

???: Geno Flash!

Everyone spun around to find Geno and Mallow free from their cages. As Geno used his flash, the Bob-ulk exploded with King Bob-omb in tow.

King Bob-omb’s Voice: FORGIVE ME KLUS! NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

Mario: Whew, thanks Geno you’d saved our necks.

Geno: Glad I can be of service.

Mario: Why are you guys here anyway?

Mallow: Well, when we’ve heard that you guys were defeated by someone, we’ve came to help. But that dumb Bob-omb King ambushed us.

Luigi: You guys want to join us? We’re looking for the Crystal Stars.

Yoshi: We can use all the help we can get.

Mario: But guys, we have no way of getting to Kitchen Island.

Mallow: Well, I have a boat for us to ride in. That’s how we got here.

Geno: And well be more than happy to help.

They got to Mallow’s boat. His boat was completely made of clouds. At first, the heroes were suspicious, but they got on and the ship didn’t sank.

Mario: First stop, Kitchen Island. Let’s-a go!

The boat sailed away to Kitchen Island. Meanwhile, Klus came out bushes. He was spying on our heroes.

Klus: Well, it seems that the first Crystal Star those fools found is on Kitchen Island. Well no matter. They will be mine. Wait till those fools run into the trap I was setting. HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Fan Creations / Re: Super Mario Bros X: The Great One

« on: September 09, 2005, 10:07:00 AM »

The sinister Wario Bros were at Kitchen Island. They were in Wario’s Castle and they enjoyed having each other around.

Wario(with a couch cushion in his hand): FOR THE LAST TIME! IF YOU’RE GOING TO LIVE HERE, YOU’RE GOING TO HAVE TO PAY RENT!

Okay, they don’t.

Waluigi: But I don’t want to pay no dumb rent! Now you’re my brother. Why can’t you understand that?

Wario(with his head in the couch cushion): This pillow stuffing tastes like I’m choking. Why does this happen every time I stuff candy in here? (gets his head out of the cushion) Now Waluigi, you’re paying rent. No doubt about it. And your rent is due right abooooouuuuuuuuttttttttttt…now.

Waluigi: Fine you stupid fool.

Waluigi pulled out a pretty looking stone shaped like a star. Little did he know that was a Crystal Star.
Wario: Good thing you’d paid me. With this rather expensive looking star-shaped rock. Where did you find this rock anyway?

Waluigi: Why it was just at the north end of the island.

Wario: Hmm…Maybe we should find more of these things.

Waluigi: Why?

Wario: So we can be filthy rich! You fool!

Waluigi: Well fine then. Let’s do it.

They were just beginning to bumble their way around to find the Crystal Stars only to be interrupted by a knock at the door.

Wario: Go answer that, will you? I’ve got to hide this jewel in a special place.

Waluigi opened the door only to Petey Piranha at door.

Petey: (roars like did in Sunshine)

Waluigi closed the door, yet he remained calm. Wario then appeared.

Waluigi(calmly): You remember that Piranha plant with the big head and polka-dotted underwear? Who was cheating in the kart races?

Wario: Yes I think I remember that freak. His name was Petey. But what does he/it has to do with anything?

Waluigi(panicking): HE’S AT THE DOOR!!!!!

Wario: What?!

But it was too late. Petey rammed his head in to open the door.

Wario & Waluigi: (screamed like little girly men)

Petey threw up on them to stop the brothers in their track.

Wario(gross-out): That…was…disgusting.

Waluigi: You should talk. You pick your nose.

Wario: Ah…shut up! What do you want mister “I’m a plant yet I still wear clothes”

Petey tried the best he could to tell them.

Petey(scratchy and disoriented): Crydsdjkfshkdhssatr.

Wario: What?

Waluigi(translating): I think he was trying to say “Crystal Star.”

Petey nodded ‘yes’

Waluigi: I think that jewel I gave you to pay rent is that. It was Crystal-lookin.

Wario: It was wasn’t it. ( to Petey) Well you can forget about it freak! I ain’t giving it to you.

Petey then let out a huge roar.

Wario(mockingly): Oh…look at me I’ve got no brain.

Petey then grabbed the two brothers and took them deep into their own castle.

Waluigi: Way to go tubby.

Wario: Ah, shut up!

Meanwhile on a dark mansion, on what it seems to be in the middle of nowhere lies a crisis. Bowser, the King of Koopas, was there along with his Magikoopa henchmen Kamek and Kammy. Then the owner of the mansion, King Boo appeared.

Bowser: I can’t believe I lost over half of my army that easily. What a stinking waste.

Bowser stomp the ground to cause an earthquake.

King Boo: Hey, stop that! If you’re going to stay here tell me what happened.

Bowser sighed and then a flashback occurred. It was to days ago at Bowser’s castle. Everything was just going as normally as it was. Various Koopas were patrolling on their shift. Bowser, Kammy, and Kamek then appeared.

Bowser: I can’t believe my plan of kidnapping Princess Peach failed. I had the perfect plan. Kidnapped her, then ambushed Mario, Luigi, and Wario. How could I have failed.

Kamek: You didn’t expect a certain Yoshi to come and rescue Mario, who rescued Luigi, who rescued Wario.

Bowser: Well why didn’t you two foresaw this?!

Kammy: You gave me the day off that day.

Kamek: I thought it was just a dream.

Bowser: ARGH! Well we’re just going to have to work on the next plan. At least it can’t get any worse.

Right at he said that, a familiar Koopa then busted through the window. Of course it was Klus.

Bowser: Who are you? Do you work for me.

Klus: My name is Klus and no I don’t.

Bowser(calmly): So why did you just (enraged) BUST THROUGH MY WINDOW LIKE THAT?!

Klus: So I can show you this.

Klus fired ice breath right out of his mouth. Kammy and Kamek then used their magic to protect themselves and Bowser.

Kamek: Who does this guy thinks he is.

Klus: I am planning to bring back the “Great One”!

Bowser eyes snapped wide open. It was as if he knew who the Great One was.

Bowser: NO WAY!

Kammy: Do you want us to expose of him my lord?

Bowser: No, leave this to me!

Bowser then squared off with Klus. Bowser performed a Whirling Fortress but Klus jump out of the way with ease.

Klus: Hmph. Pathetic.

Bowser then tried to breath fire on Klus, but it had no effect.

Bowser(disbelief): What. But how?

Klus didn’t answer this. Instead he came up and punched Bowser in the face. It was somehow, incredibly strong.

Bowser(thinking): Hmm. This guy is no joke.

Bowser tried to bite Klus but Klus counted it with a head butt.

Bowser: You’re starting to become a pain!

Klus: Oh then take this.

Klus then did a Whirling Fortress to knock Bowser on his back.

Bowser(thinking and fearful): No! A Koopa’s worse nightmare.

Klus then jump in the air and body slammed Bowser. The Koopa King went out cold. When Bowser woke up he saw his Magikoopa henchmen, all of his children, but only a smaller only. They were not in the castle but in a dark valley:

Bowser: Where’s my army.

Kamek: Most of them joined Klus. Only we remained.

Bowser: GGGRRR! What did he want? Besides trying to revive the feared “Great One?”

Kammy: He said he needed Crystal Stars to revive him.

Bowser: Well that’s settled. We’ll start looking for them by tomorrow. But now, we head to King Boo and his loyalists.

The flashback then ended and King Boo sat there with disbelief.

Bowser: One of the scouts said that that fool Waluigi had gotten his hands on a Crystal Star. So I sent Petey Piranha to go get it.

King Boo: Well, you’re welcome to stay here and I’ll help you find those Crystal Stars. We’ll form an alliance.

Kamek(annoyed): We already formed an alliance.

King Boo: Oh yeah that’s right. Well, my fellow Boos and I will help you find the Crystal Stars. Then we can used the Stars’ power to bring our enemies to their doom. And I’m not talking about Klus, I’m also talking about the Mario Bros.

Bowser then lifted his head up with delight.

Bowser: Now you’re talking my language.

Bowser and King Boo laughed manically.

(to be continued)

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Mario Chat / Nintendo DK or Rareware DK

« on: October 02, 2005, 11:51:09 AM »

Which one do you perfer?

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Fan Creations / Super Mario Bros X: The Great One

« on: September 05, 2005, 12:18:37 PM »

Hello. This is my first fic as well as first post on this board. I hope you like the story.


Super Mario Bros: The Great One

It was just a normal day at Mario’s house. Mario, Luigi were drinking Koopa Tea with Yoshi who was just visiting. Mario and Luigi were telling their stories about the Thousand Year Door and the Marvelous Compass.

Yoshi: So that’s what happen. But it’s not like the time I had to rescue you two and Wario from Bowser, who pulled off the same plot.

Luigi: Don’t flatter yourself.

Mario: Don’t flatter yourself. Your exaggeration about your adventures. Good thing your partners were there to tell the truth.

Luigi sweatdropped as Yoshi laughed. Then there was a noise outside.

Mario: I’ll go see what was going on.

Mario left the house then came back with a letter in his hand.

Luigi: You know I’m usually the one who gets the mail.

Mario: Well, I wanted to get it this time.

Mario read the message in the letter.

Mario: Guys, we’re invited to a party in the castle.

That got little excitement from his friends.

Luigi: That’s good.

Yoshi(frightened): We’re doomed! Don’t you know that whenever you get a letter from Peach something bad is going to happen.

Mario: Don’t be ridiculous. That doesn’t always happen.

Luigi and Yoshi gave him a “yeah right” stare. Mario then remembered the events from when Bowser stole the Power Stars, twice. Bowser stealing the Star Rod and the Crystal Stars incident.

Mario: Alright, alright. I get it. But this can’t possibly happened again. Let’s go to the party.

The trio headed to the party. But unknown to them a dark figure was watching them.

???: Hmm. It would seem that those three are some of the Mushroom World’s greatest heroes. It would seem that they must be eliminated in order for the “Great One” to return.

When Mario, Luigi, and Yoshi got to the party, they received a standing ovation. Yoshi was acting silly.

Yoshi(bowing): Thank you. I really appreciate it.

Luigi and Mario sweatdropped.

Mario: Just ignore him. He’s acting like child he his again.

The trio found DK, Diddy, and Dixie eating and talking to the locals.

Mario: Hey guys.

DK: What’s up you three.

Diddy: Hi.

Dixie: Hello.

Mario: Do any of you three know where Princess Peach is?

Yoshi was making kissing noises.

Mario: Shut up!

DK: I think she’s up in her quarters.

Mario: Thanks.

The trio headed up to the Peach’s quarters. But they still didn’t realized they were being stalked.

???: It’s almost time. I need to mark the beginning of the end.

Our trio was finally near the top floor of the castle when they finally met Peach.

Peach: Oh Mario. You came to visit me, you’re so thoughtful. Luigi and Yoshi, you also came to.

Luigi: What are friends for? Right Yoshi?

Luigi saw Yoshi searching around him.

Luigi(peeved): What are you doing?

Yoshi: I think danger’s coming I can feel it.

Mario(angrily): Yoshi for the last time there is no danAs soon as Mario said that, the castle began to rumble.

Yoshi: I TOLD YOU!

Outside people can see something is happening to the castle. It was disappearing right in front of their eyes. Two minutes later, the entire castle disappeared.

When the castle reappeared, it was at an entirely different place. The surroundings were strangely, misguiding. Everything was… dark colored. The trees, the water, and even the sun was black too.
When the castle stop shaking, everyone was calmed down.

Mario: What was that?!

Luigi: Like anyone of us knows.

Peach looked out the window.

Peach: Umm. Isn’t suppose to be daytime. But it’s seems to be pitch black for some reason.

Then the thing that stalked Mario and his friends, came crashing through the window.

Peach: I just had that window fixed when Bowser came crashing through it.

Mario: It’s probably Bowser again. Be ready.

Mario and Yoshi were ready for a rumble while Luigi was standing cowardly behind them. But the creature wasn’t Bowser. It was just simply a male, golden Koopa Troopa.

Yoshi: You mean, he caused all of this. A lowly Koopa Troopa.

???: My name is Klus! And I’m here to summon the “Great One”.

Mario(still on the defensive): But why would you need the castle?

Klus: I used the disappearing of the castle to trap you and these two other heroes.

Luigi(stammering): B-but w-why us?

Klus: Easy. (points to Mario) you have the Crystal Stars. Give them to me to summon the “Great One”.

Yoshi: I think that “Shadow Queen” character is the “Great One”.

Mario: Well, you can forget it! I used the magic of the Crystal Stars to scatter them all across the world. And I’d destroyed the Magical Map so they would be harder to find.

Klus: So you’ve decided to knock off years of your life by doing that.

Mario: It’s going to be your life that’s going to be shorten. Let’s get him guys!

Mario pulled out his hammer
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Luigi:(gulps)

Luigi pulled out his hammer stammering.

Yoshi: I have no hammer, but take this.

Yoshi pulled out some throwing eggs and the battle began.

Klus(while cracking his knuckles): This is going to be blowout!

Play Music: Bowser’s Theme from Paper Mario 1

Mario and Luigi tried to swipe Klus with their hammers but the villain dodged them and attack them with his hammers. Mario and Luigi were sent flying.

Klus: Were you surprised that I use hammers like Hammer Bros.

Yoshi threw eggs but Klus dodged them with ease. Yoshi jump high up in the air and tried to use Ground Pound. But, he felt extreme pain on his rear.

Yoshi(loudly): AWOWOWOWOWOW!

Klus somehow had spikes come out of his shell.

Klus: Ah. Spinies. They are formidable creatures.

Mario and Luigi threw some fireballs at Klus. The fireballs hit Klus, but it did no damage to him.

Mario(sarcastically): Let me guess, Buzzy Beetle.

Klus: Correct. Now take this I’ve learned from Magikoopas.

Klus fired a magic spell at the heroes, but they dodged them with eased. Yoshi threw eggs and knocked Klus over.

Yoshi: WOOT!

But Klus spun around and damaged Yoshi.

Yoshi(while in the air): Curse you Shady Koopa ability!

Klus got back up as Yoshi was slammed on to the ground.

Klus threw a boomerang, a Boomerang Bro. ability, to hit the three heroes.

Mario, Luigi, and Yoshi: AAARGHH!

Klus then came up to them with Dark Koopa Spin. It missed Mario but got Luigi and Yoshi.

Yoshi: Man, that hurts.

Luigi: I…can’t…go on.

Mario: We can’t give up. We can stop him.

Klus threw Spiny Eggs, a Lakitu ability, but the Mario and Luigi dodged it, but it hit Yoshi and he went out cold.

Peach: YOSHI!

Yoshi:….

Mario and Luigi were now angry. Luigi fired up a Thunderhand attack while Mario fired his Super Flame attack.

Klus: Fools please.

He used his Magikoopa ability to absorbed both attacks, then send back to the Mario Bros. They hit both Bros. Mario was barely hanging onto life. But Luigi was knocked out too.

Mario(weakly): no.

Peach: LUIGI!

Klus: HA! Two down, one more to go.

Mario(weakly): You’ll never win.

Klus: Shut up! But before you go I have one more thing to say to you. The “Great One” is not the Shadow Queen but someone worse. Now to muster up the strongest attack. Bowser’ fire breath!

Klus breathed a mighty fire attack to burn Mario. And then, Mario fainted.

Peach: MARIO, LUIGI, YOSHI!

Klus: To easy. Those fools! And you my dear. You’re coming with me.

Peach: Why?

Klus: BECAUSE I SAID SO! Now if you excuse me.

At the snapped of his fingers, Mario, Luigi, and Yoshi disappeared.

(to be continued)