Wow, great story! Very long but very good and hilarious. I love how you are putting everyone from the Mario universe into this story. And I really like your idea of mentioning what kind of music you want for the scene. That's something I did with fan fiction too (I think). I especially like the line that goes "Who said you could start the party without me. Yoshis are known to party" Go Yoshis! (= (: )===O
(E I):o{D___(--I I):o(D___(o 8(= P)___(= (: )@)___(3 I)}:O})+)___<( )=(: )) )
Edited by - Yoshisaurus Rex on 10/14/2005 9:26:21 PM