Author Topic: The revenge of Luigi!  (Read 10244 times)


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« on: June 30, 2004, 12:22:35 PM »
Here's a little story I decided to try.  It's the story of a brutal murder taking place during a rescue mission.  Luigi must take down the one responsible for its happening.  This is the story of Luigi's revenge.

Chapter 1: How it happened.

It was late in the night when Luigi and his brother Mario went out to search for the Princess for what seemed like the 1,000,000th time.  They had barely made it halfway, when in an instant, Mario yelled out "Stop!"
"Why?"  Luigi asked.
"This might be a trap!"  Mario exclaimed.  So they continued on their way, unaware of what was about to happen.

A couple of hours later, they had made it to the steps of King Bowser Koopa's castle.
"Come on Luigi, let's go in there, bust some Koopa butt, and get Peach back!"
"Let's do this!"  Luigi said back.  They entered the castle.

On the other end of the castle, Bowser had flattened Yoshi in Yoshi's attempt to save the Princess.
"You foolish dino!  You can't stop me, and as soon as Ludwig returns with that power pendant chain, nobody will be able to withstand my power!  Bwahahahahahaha!"  Bowser roared.  (The pendant referred to is the same one from the SMB3 cartoon episode "Super Koopa")

Just then, the door opened.  Mario and Luigi stormed in.
"Bowser!  Just give us back the Princess, and we won't beat you for the 1,000,000th time!"  Mario said.
"Dad!"  Ludwig called.  "I have your power pendant!"
"That's great son!  You are the most worthy of my worthless kids! Bwahahahahaha!"  Bowser said.  "And now the Mario brothers will pay double for all the times they have beaten me!"

So the fight was on.  Mario charged at Bowser, but Bowser smacked him to the side like he was nothing.  Luigi suffered the same fate.  Bowser rubbed the pendant, and he began to glow.
"What you just received was nothing compared to the pain you are about to feel!"  Bowser said as he powered up.  He continued to glow, which must have been the sign that he was powered up.  Mario fired a fireball at Bowser, but Bowser sent it back at Mario like a Roger Clemens fastball.  Mario was fried instantly.
"I always wanted my Mario deep-fried!"  Bowser said.  Luigi narrowly ducked to avoid Bowser's fire breath.  Luigi then did his super leap into the air, and crashed down on Bowser.  Bowser fell to the floor.
"Well, that was easy."  Luigi said.  Bowser then jumped to his feet, repaired of all damage.
"I always open my mouth at the wrong time!"  Luigi said.  Bowser powered up and fired several nuke blasts.  Luigi ducked and closed his eyes.  Then he realized he wasn't the one targeted, it was Mario.  Luigi tried to save Mario, but it was too late.  Mario was nothing short of destroyed.

"No..."  Luigi whispered.
"Yes!!!  I might even give Ludwig a hug for reconstructing this thing!"  Bowser said.  "Waitaminute, where's Peach?"  Luigi asked Bowser.  "Oh, she's at the castle.  I sent her home after receiving word that you and the late Mario were coming.  It was just a plot to lure you here!"  Bowser laughed.  Luigi looked and what he saw sickened him.  It was so graphic and bloody, I can't bring myself to describe it.  All I can say is that Bowser had finally defeated Mario.
"Why don't you try to kill me too?"  Luigi said.  
"Because you aren't worth it.  Yeah, you're just not worth my time.  With this pendant, I can rule the Mushroom world!"  Bowser laughed as he teleported away (a feature of that pendant that I made up) and left Luigi alone with his thoughts, and a dead Mario.

Well, what did you think of that first chapter?  R&R please.  I'd love to hear what you think.

They can take my video games, they can take my possessions, they can beat me, torture me, or flat out try to kill me, but they can never take away my love for America.  
« Last Edit: January 24, 2009, 01:32:46 AM by Jman »
I always figured "Time to tip the scales" was Wario's everyday motto.


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« Reply #1 on: June 30, 2004, 02:00:14 PM »
That was Awsome, Jman! It sounds like a very interesting story. I can't wait to hear the rest!
It's Mario's world, I just live in it. :)


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« Reply #2 on: June 30, 2004, 02:05:35 PM »
Well, I figured the forum needed another dark story besides "The Prophecy."

I could be the lost Mario brother.  Think about it.
I always figured "Time to tip the scales" was Wario's everyday motto.

« Reply #3 on: June 30, 2004, 03:09:37 PM »
Wow! This is wicked! Another great story by Jman! I love that you decided to write about Luigi! He is truly my hero!

*daydreams about Luigi*

Oh yea, I think the plot rocks! Luigi getting revenge for his brother, murdered by his rival, sounds very interesting indeed. I'm impressed!

*Cheer's for Jman!*

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« Reply #4 on: June 30, 2004, 08:42:02 PM »
Luigi getting revenge for his dead and awesomer brother can also be found in RotMK.

"Deezer is a moron, he listens to people like you guys, well, actually, he''''s barely working on his site anymore, always busy with other crap. Sapphira and Chupperson feel like they own the forum, or at least they act it"~jon

Edited by - nintendofreak on 6/30/2004 7:42:26 PM
Deezer was here.


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« Reply #5 on: June 30, 2004, 08:58:30 PM »
Yeah.  For once, a story centered around Luigi.

I could be the lost Mario brother.  Think about it.
I always figured "Time to tip the scales" was Wario's everyday motto.

« Reply #6 on: July 01, 2004, 12:58:10 AM »
For once? I'm almost certain that there is more Luigi fan fiction than Mario.

I might be Sadib...
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« Reply #7 on: July 02, 2004, 06:14:53 PM »
After much deliberation, I have decided to continue this story.  I just need some time to write it.  I've been extra busy these last few days.  I'll probably manage another chapter by midweek.

I could be the lost Mario brother.  Think about it.
I always figured "Time to tip the scales" was Wario's everyday motto.


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« Reply #8 on: July 05, 2004, 06:12:25 PM »
Chapter 2: Luigi gets down to business

It was the 4th of July.  Fireworks were being lit off everywhere.  Everybody was having a good time.  Everyone except poor ol' Luigi.  It had been nearly 10 days since the brutal murder of Mario by Bowser.  Luigi watched fireworks from his bedroom window.

Princess Daisy arrived red carpet style at the party, and she immediately went looking for Luigi.  She and Luigi had that same kind of thing that Mario and Peach had.  But now Mario was dead, never to enjoy another fourth of July.

Daisy found Luigi staring out his window.
"Hi!" She said.
"Oh, hi."  Luigi said very gloomily.
"Luigi, why aren't you out here having fun with us?"  She asked him.
"Mario's dead..."  Luigi said.
"What??  I thought he was out getting a pizza or something!"  Daisy said.
"No... he's dead...Bowser killed him..."

Luigi's voice started to crack and he sunk into Daisy's arms.  Daisy started to say something, but then she decided it was best to just comfort Luigi, the man that she was very close to.  She hated to see him hurt like this.
"Luigi, I'm sorry Mario's gone, but you need to come out here and cheer up!" She told him.
"Yeah, I suppose you're right.  Let's go!"  Luigi managed a smile.  Daisy hurried out of the room.  Luigi said a few explicitives about Bowser and then left saying "You'll pay for this Bowser, I swear it!"

"I can't believe he actually did it!"  Lemmy Koopa said to his sister Wendy.
"Me neither.  I heard him say it many times, but I never thought he would actually kill Mario!"  Even Bowser's kids were shocked that their dad would actually kill his arch-nemesis.
"Well I'm not!"  Ludwig said.  "I heard him swear to the sky that he would kill Mario.  I helped him by reconstructing that pendant that made him "Super Koopa" all those years ago!"
"Well, I've got a match tonight!  I've got to go!"  Lemmy said.  Iggy followed him.  They were going to SSB Live to fight.

Back at the house of Luigi, the party was over, and everyone else had gone home.  Everyone except Daisy.  She wanted to stay with Luigi and keep him company, since Mario had been destroyed by Bowser.  Luigi slept on the floor, letting Daisy have his bed.  They said goodnight and fell asleep.  Luigi couldn't help but think "Bowser will die for what he did!  I will avenge Mario!"

Well, there's chapter 2.

I could be the lost Mario brother.  Think about it.
I always figured "Time to tip the scales" was Wario's everyday motto.


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« Reply #9 on: March 15, 2005, 06:08:40 PM »
Preview of chapter 3:

A few days have passed since Mario's gruesome end. Mario's funeral takes place, but Bowser and his kids crash it. Bowser has overtaken the castle of Peach and has also taken over the kingdom!  Will Luigi be able to stop him?  or will he end up suffering the same fate as Mario?  Find out next chapter!

I''ve found that if you have a goal, you might not make it.  But if you don''t have one, you''re never disappointed.  Let me tell you, it feels phenomenal!
I always figured "Time to tip the scales" was Wario's everyday motto.


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« Reply #10 on: June 03, 2005, 07:32:17 PM »
Chapter 3: funeral crashers, koopa bashers, and Luigi's lost it!


Luigi had been hearing these voices for days now.  Ever since Mario's gruesome end, Luigi had been hearing his voice in his dreams.  He had also seen gruesome images in his mind; images that foretold the future of the MK.  Luigi had tried telling these things to other people, but they disregarded him as a crazy dreamer.

 However, there was one person who stuck by his side every time someone rebuked him.  Daisy, as a matter of fact, had put an end to the heckling of her man with what the locals simply call the "slap heard round the world."  The sorry sap on the receiving end of the blow had to move to Iceland just to stick his head in the ice water and stop the pain.  Ouch.  Anyway, Daisy was over at Luigi's house that night, and Luigi was extremely grateful to have someone stay with him on the eve of Mario's funeral.

        Luigi had to let Daisy know how he felt about her.  But he had to wait until the right moment.  Although he had to admit that deepening his friendship with Daisy into a relationship was the last thing on his mind.  Of course, first was getting his revenge on Bowser.  For now, however, he decided to forget about Bowser, and enjoy a quiet evening at home with his good friend.

    "Luigi, you haven't said anything since I got here except, 'Hi Daisy, please come in and sit down.' What's on your mind?"  Daisy said to break the silence.
"Nothing" He said. "Well, actually, there is something."
   "What's that?"  Daisy asked him.
"Well, it's just that...Mario was my only living relative before last week.  My parents both died when I was young, and me and Mario were raised in the street by our uncle, a tough old Italian American man who first taught us how to fight."  Luigi sat there silently.
"Go on"  Daisy told him.
"One day, when me and Mario were in the sewers fending off several weird creatures, we found the pipe they were coming out of.  We climbed into the pipe, and were suddenly in this kingdom."
"Mario pointed out to me that the people were all turned to stone.  Both of us wondered why or how this happened.  It turned out that Princess Peach had been kidnapped by Bowser, and was being held at his castle.  For some strange reason, we went off on this adventure and defeated Bowser, rescued the princess, and the rest is history."
"Wow.  That's awesome, Luigi."
"And now he's...gone..."  Luigi faded into silence.
Daisy just sat next to him and wrapped her arms around him.  She just held him through the night.

The next morning, it was dark, rainy and nasty.  "Just the type of day for a funeral.."  Said Luigi as he got up and out the door.  At the church, the casket was closed up.  Apparently, they had not been able to find Mario's body.  It made perfect sense, considering Bowser basically vaporized him with his power.

      So the funeral service began.  It started off with a reading from the Bible, and then, various people were allowed to the podium to voice their thoughts and memories of Mario.  Luigi was up on the podium, and he was just getting ready to speak, when Bowser and his kids crashed the party by crashing through the church window!
"Mwa ha ha ha ha!"  Bowser laughed!  "I myself have some thoughts and memories of Mario!"  The evil koopa laughed.

I''ve said my piece, now I''m off to some hardcore SSBM action!
I always figured "Time to tip the scales" was Wario's everyday motto.


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« Reply #11 on: June 04, 2005, 08:41:25 AM »
Preview of ch.4:

When Bowser crashes Mario's funeral, he gets up on the podium simply to mock Mario's greatness.  It's more than Luigi can bear, as he leaps up from his chair and completly loses it.  Luigi vs Bowser ensues!  And when it ends, you won't believe what happens next!  All in chapter 4 of The Revenge of Luigi!

I''ve said my piece, now I''m off to some hardcore SSBM action!
I always figured "Time to tip the scales" was Wario's everyday motto.

« Reply #12 on: June 07, 2005, 02:12:59 PM »
very good. about time there was a dark story.





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« Reply #13 on: March 12, 2006, 10:12:05 PM »
This story is one I am planning to update next weekend. 
I always figured "Time to tip the scales" was Wario's everyday motto.

« Reply #14 on: March 12, 2006, 11:29:41 PM »
The story rawks!!! I feel so sorry for Luigi. And I wonder how Peach feels now that her lover is gone :(. This is a sad story, but I'm looking forward to some action!
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