Critiques part IV:
InfinitysEnd: Your work is really nice. However, either fix the T, or we just can't use it.
TMKbannershroomtext.png: Glad you tried out my idea. It works, but not as well as the ones you did after that...
TMKbannercoinlogo.png: Love the golden text
TMKbannerpeachwtag.png: It would look better if the "The" wasn't italicized.
TMKbannerpeach.png: It's better with the tagline.
TMKbannershroom2.png: The problem here is not the coin and mushroom itself, but the type of coin and mushroom used. If you did it like aD-aX, it could work.
TMKbannerani.gif: Very nice looking, except the T of course.
TMKbanneranitag1.gif / TMKbanneranitag2.gif / TMKbanneranitag3.gif / TMKbanneranitag4.gif: Hmm I bet we could come up with something wittier than that for the tagline, but they do look nice.
Suffix: Looking good. I'm just going to list some possible alterations to make things more interesting.
tmkbanner-i1c.jpg: What if the main text was Super Mushroom themed? (add white dots)
tmkbanner-i2c.jpg: How about outlining the main text somehow?
Super-Dino-Yoshi:
TMKbanner19.jpg: The light gradient is weird on the left side.
TMKbanner20.jpg: Too dim and poor URL font
TMKbanner-dud.jpg: Yeah, I'm not sure what's going on here...
TMKbanner21.gif / TMKbanner22.gif: You forgot the .net and perhaps a tagline along the ground level (one of ours).
TMKbanner23.jpg: No, the M in that case is okay, but yes, lose the tagline.
TMKbanner24.jpg: And by lose the tagline I mean use ours or one that describes the site better rather than just having clouds.
¥tterbiJúm: Poorly pasted text and simple sprites won't cut it.
XanderX: Wow, somebody's just jumped to the top of the pack!
tmk_banner_468x60.png: Very nice.
tmk_banner_468x60_v2.png: Nope, don't like the tagline colors or tagline itself.
tmk_banner_468x60_v3.png: This could work, but it's spelled "definitive" You might be able to lighten the blue a bit to make it more readable.
tmk_banner_468x60_v4.png: Don't like the tagline.
Brian S. (GMail): Yes, that's waaaaaaaaaaay too cluttered and wholly unreadable.
Typhlosion (GMail): Sorta funny, but what's with the negative image parts of the main text? Again, sprites-only won't cut it.
Shadic (GMail): It's okay, but just that, okay. The text seems stretched or antialiased strangely.
HOT TIP: It's okay to "steal" others' ideas that we like. If you do, you and the person with the original idea will both "win" the contest.
Things we like:
3D text that really stands out
Tagline inclusion
Original or creative use of art
Things we don't like:
Only sprites
Nonsensical taglines
Aliasing
Poor pasting/layout jobs
Poor font use
Remember, the banner should compel people who haven't heard of the site before to visit.
Edited by - MEGAߥTE on 11/5/2004 11:57:58 PM