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Fan Creations / Re: Mario's fairwell Pt.1
« on: November 07, 2005, 07:41:09 PM »
One side of Mario I never knew he had.
Story kinda seemed rushed. Not too presonal, but I think the quality isn't very top-notch. Don't be mad though, don't wanna make a new member mad at a kinda-new member. (I've been here for a bit more then a month.) Kind of confusing, and WAY too muych commas. Nice though.
Orginized is my middle name.
Poorly is my first.
Story kinda seemed rushed. Not too presonal, but I think the quality isn't very top-notch. Don't be mad though, don't wanna make a new member mad at a kinda-new member. (I've been here for a bit more then a month.) Kind of confusing, and WAY too muych commas. Nice though.
Orginized is my middle name.
Poorly is my first.