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« Reply #15 on: March 25, 2006, 07:35:34 PM »
-yawn- boring.
I see poop.

« Reply #16 on: March 28, 2006, 01:14:45 AM »
It may be to you, but i ask a simple question...or two...
Why did you post if it sounded boing to you?
Why are you in this thread at all?
But its okay. This story just isn't for everyone...
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« Reply #17 on: May 23, 2006, 06:46:33 PM »
Last chapter.
Thank you to all readers!
Thank you very much!
Hope you enjoyed.
From,
Alvin "Dude677" Vega.
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« Reply #18 on: May 24, 2006, 05:25:36 AM »
I'm not usually into that type of thing, but it was an interesting read. :)

There were a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but nothing too major... btw, there are two Chapter Elevens. Other than these things, excellent job!
If my son could decimate Lego cities with his genitals, I'd be [darn] proud.

SolidShroom

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« Reply #19 on: May 24, 2006, 02:45:55 PM »
That story was really good. Are you considering a career in writing? You really should. This sis the first fanfic I've read on FF and now I am hooked on them.

« Reply #20 on: May 25, 2006, 10:37:29 AM »
That story was Deep. (Wipes a tear from his eye) Great I have to say great wish it could go on though. You are very good at writeing dude677. It was great I cant say enough. I usually don't even like this kinda stuff.
SSBB theme lyrics: I'll be the Marth, Luigi noob, This is Yoshi's B, This monkey wants to hug him. I'll heat the duck, Uigi noob, pooped through the dress this monkey wears to work.

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