Author Topic: Wario's Grill. (Read 25876 times)

SuperBros64 · « **Reply #30 on:** April 21, 2007, 02:18:17 PM »

the story is getting better. and mmore stupid. but you should add more characters and make wario try to get a girlfriend, that would be funny

PaperLuigi · « **Reply #31 on:** April 21, 2007, 02:38:31 PM »

Dude, it's great that you like the story, but there's no way I'm going to make Wario get a girlfriend.

BTW, I fixed the note thing.

Can you guys find the secret in the third chapter yet? It's not that difficult to find if you know your history.

The Chef · « **Reply #32 on:** April 21, 2007, 04:49:09 PM »

I'm almost certain that Mona was hinted to be Wario's girl in WarioWare, but I don't think it's wise to just suggest random junk to add. Let PL continue it the way he wants. It's his story, and although some like myself might find it not-all-that-interesting, he still has the right to write what he wants.

Masher101 · « **Reply #33 on:** April 21, 2007, 05:25:16 PM »

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"Best if used by August 13, 1991."

I think that has somthing to do with the secret... but I'm probably wrong...

PaperLuigi · « **Reply #34 on:** April 21, 2007, 05:52:06 PM »

I'm not giving away secrets. The guy who figures it out will get a free, virtual sandwich.

BTW, the next chapter will be...........I dunno, sometime next week. TC, I thought you weren't even reading this.

The Chef · « **Reply #35 on:** April 21, 2007, 06:51:28 PM »

Hey, I may not like the style, but someone does, and you're free to write what you want, so long as it doesn't completely lack any sort of talent whatsoever.

SuperBros64 · « **Reply #36 on:** April 21, 2007, 06:56:34 PM »

Quote from: PaperLuigi on April 21, 2007, 02:38:31 PM

Dude, it's great that you like the story, but there's no way I'm going to make Wario get a girlfriend.

BTW, I fixed the note thing.

Can you guys find the secret in the third chapter yet? It's not that difficult to find if you know your history.

i never said him getting a girlfriend, i meant for wario trying to get a girlfriend and see him do stupid things for them to like him

Kojinka · « **Reply #37 on:** April 21, 2007, 07:05:22 PM »

Well, I guess I could have Wario do stupid things to try and win Pauline over in Super Mario Future. I need some more humor in that chapter anyway.

SuperBros64 · « **Reply #38 on:** April 21, 2007, 07:07:14 PM »

thank you it would have interesting stuff in it if you write it good!

Masher101 · « **Reply #39 on:** April 21, 2007, 07:47:14 PM »

Well, all I can say... is that this is a pretty good dang story so far... oh and is Super Mario Future some story you're making Kojinka?

Kojinka · « **Reply #40 on:** April 22, 2007, 10:00:12 AM »

Yeah, but the chapter I was working on started to turn into a bad soap opera. Now, I'd like to just drop the subject and wait for PaperLuigi to continue HIS story.

PaperLuigi · « **Reply #41 on:** April 22, 2007, 10:02:52 AM »

I'm still working on chapter 4, so it might be up tomarrow.

Masher101 · « **Reply #42 on:** April 22, 2007, 10:24:59 AM »

Awww... Well, I can wait... and I'm really trying to find the secret... the virtual sandwich sounds... tasty.

PaperLuigi · « **Reply #43 on:** April 22, 2007, 12:16:45 PM »

EDITED.

minkbob · « **Reply #44 on:** April 22, 2007, 01:13:46 PM »

Funny story. I like it.

Also, I found the reference in Chapter 3.

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"Best if used by August 13, 1991."

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Release Data
Super Mario World    Nintendo    11/21/90    JP
Super Mario World    Nintendo    08/13/91    US
Super Mario World    Nintendo    04/11/92    EU

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