Nice. Try to make them a little longer though.
After re-reading, I noticed that these are pretty short. This chapter will be longer.
-Chapter 4-
-Recap- Last time we left off, Mario and Sonic were being held back by Dark Sonic and a Subspace ROB. In a very blunt and straightforward move, a hypnotized Bowser (referred to here on as Hypno Bowser) steered a Subspace Gunship into the Halberd and captured it.
-???? ?????, same time as attack-
"Hahaha. That fool Tabuu is doing my job for me. Just a little more time." A mysterious voice commented.
-Smash Stadium-
A few seconds after the attack, the Gunship floated over the Stadium and shot out a large tractor beam, taking in Mario, Sonic, the Subspace ROB, and Dark Sonic aboard. As this happened, the crowd scattered. Peach gasped at the sight.
-Dream Land*-
In the far off land of Dream Land, Kirby saw the whole attack happen. So did King DeDeDe. With that, DeDeDe and Kirby both went into their respective ships, went into hyperspeed, and landed right ontop of the Gunship.
-Halberd-
"Meta Knight, our ship has been damaged beyond repair." Lucario thought. "I'm not blind, you know." Meta Knight responded. "Lets go look at the damage." At this point, the ground shook. "Whats going on?" Meta Knight yelled. "Sir, it appears the Gunship is taking us into their bay**." A Primid said. "Perfect." Lucario thought.
-Inside the Cargo Bay.-
As soon as Mario and Sonic made it to the Cargo Bay, they were dropped. At this point, Mario attacked the Subspace ROB*** and Sonic attacked his dark self. After about 20 minutes of fighting, the Subspace ROB fell and Dark Sonic dissapated. "Yahoo!" Mario cried in triumph. "Lets get out of here." Sonic suggested. Mario nodded. After looking around for 5 minutes, Mario found the key. Mario unlocked the door and left.
*What? It was about time Kirby joined the story.
**The bay that the Halberd was taken into was a Docking Bay, not the cargo.
*** A new kind of ROB, has joined the newly formed Subspace Army. When destroyed (like most enemies), its Shadow Bugs fall out and it dies.
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-Luigalaxy
UPDATE: After getting a PM on a better wording, I changed the point where the Gunship pulls in Mario, Sonic, SSROB and Dark Sonic. (Thanks goes to jmdblazer)