Author Topic: The Prophecy (Read 65621 times)

Sapphira · « **Reply #120 on:** May 31, 2003, 12:21:00 PM »

No. See earlier post:

"Takes about 2 weeks per chapter now.
I know that's a long time, but you want it to be the best it can, right? Please be patient. :)"

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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.

Bluto · « **Reply #121 on:** June 03, 2003, 04:14:00 PM »

Man I wish I would have paid attention a few days ago and saw that chapter 14 was posted. I agree with everyone that liked the little bit of humor, a little now and then can help to break up the dark and morbid theme of the story. Very good writings. I seem to find less time to visit here and even less time to work on my story. I'll try my best to post the next chapter soon.

Spill the blood of the innocent!!! Then clean it before it makes a mess!

jon · « **Reply #122 on:** June 05, 2003, 05:58:00 PM »

Have you seen a topic that you're supposed to read, Sapphira? Well, this story is the reason I did that. Oh, I am good at writing Mario comedy if you ever needed that.

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Luigi can't cook spagetti according to Mario.

jon · « **Reply #123 on:** June 05, 2003, 09:07:00 PM »

Can you put mario gets hit on the head with a frying pan in your story?

I'm just kidding.

jon · « **Reply #124 on:** June 07, 2003, 12:08:00 PM »

Sapphira, this story is awesome! Why don't you try publishing it and putting it on the market! You describe the scene with such amazing words-it will be hard to compete against you.
Good job.
I think the only problem with selling it to the market is that this is like an adult book and there aren't many adults out there who like Mario-except Luigison. But if anyone wants a great book, they should still check this out!^_^

Marionut#1 · « **Reply #125 on:** June 07, 2003, 12:19:00 PM »

Nintendo would probably sue....

It‘s-a me, Marionut#1!

jon · « **Reply #126 on:** June 07, 2003, 12:41:00 PM »

Well, if you went to college, + learned about Nintendo making video games and became the person who thinks of video game ideas for a Mario game, you can make the game based on this story. But it will probably be rated Mature because of certain things in this story like being raped. Of course, Spagetti+Meatballs (Shigeru Miyamoto) wouldn't want a 'M' rated Mario game. Nintendo is for the young audience-which I am.

Sapphira · « **Reply #127 on:** June 07, 2003, 12:57:00 PM »

Thank you. ^_^

Actually, that's something I want to do! ^_^ Work for Nintendo, that is. :)

I don't think this story would make a very good video game. A *movie* on the other hand... ;)

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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.

jon · « **Reply #128 on:** June 07, 2003, 01:01:00 PM »

Yes, I would also like to work for Nintendo and make video games. My story would probably make a good video game because it's more so aimed for kids(which is the Mario people) and has more action/adventure(like a normal Mario game).
My story would be up as a cartoon movie because it has a lot of comedy in it.
I think with your story, it would be better if people acted it out because there would be special effects/computer graphics and it will just perfectify(is that a word?) a movie-story.

Sapphira · « **Reply #129 on:** June 07, 2003, 01:05:00 PM »

Yeah, probably. :) Although I think it'd be best using computer animation.

And, no, "perfectify" is not a word. It's "perfect," as in "per-FECT" not "PER-fect."

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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.

jon · « **Reply #130 on:** June 07, 2003, 01:08:00 PM »

That's what I meant-computer animation.
Oh, another way to spell 'perfect' is purr-fect. Ha ha-I'm so dumb. Just kidding. BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Bowser evil laugh. Ha!

Jman · « **Reply #131 on:** June 19, 2003, 12:06:00 PM »

this message has been edited due to its noobness

Dairy King · « **Reply #132 on:** June 19, 2003, 03:12:00 PM »

Wow.....

Either way, I''m still a cad! I hate everybody! Yaaarrrgh!
-Wario

Sapphira · « **Reply #133 on:** July 06, 2003, 08:37:00 PM »

I'm so sorry I haven't posted the next chapter!! :( I'll try to get on it...

*Sigh*
Well, on another note, I put this story up on Fanfiction.net... It's been up for 2 days (well, 24 hours, technically, but over the span of two days--and updated once since I put it up) and no one's made a review...*sniffle*

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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.

Jman · « **Reply #134 on:** July 08, 2003, 08:37:00 AM »

I just read it today. Man, this story really could be the box office smash Mario movie. I reviewed it too.

The master of multiplayer Mario games: You''re looking at him right now!