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TEM · « **Reply #30 on:** July 06, 2009, 03:38:30 PM »

"I'm an astronaut and I'm going to space."

PaperLuigi · « **Reply #31 on:** July 06, 2009, 04:00:22 PM »

Quote from: Lizard Dude on July 06, 2009, 03:20:23 PM

I think he picks the absolute most boring response, so if you want to get picked there's still good opportunity for this juncture.

This topic is only good for reading the responses not picked.

Glorb · « **Reply #32 on:** July 06, 2009, 04:38:57 PM »

"K-Far will not pick this response, knowing that he must pick something unexpected to beat people's opinion that he only picks boring responses."

K-Far · « **Reply #33 on:** July 06, 2009, 06:55:11 PM »

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Turtlekid1 · « **Reply #34 on:** July 06, 2009, 08:29:24 PM »

Sure they do. Just not in the direction you have in mind.

TEM · « **Reply #35 on:** July 06, 2009, 08:35:27 PM »

"Kiss me, you fool!" << romantic plot that might keep the astronaut from going into space? Sounds like a story to me.

"Alex, why did we go to 'collage' instead of college?" << Maybe her misspelling reveals that "Alex" is a spy from another countries space program, lot's of story there!

"I'm an astronaut, who's the 'retard that doesn't study enough' now?" << A past rivalry? Maybe Alex is the Gary MF Oak of the main character's life and he has just been assigned to join the astronaut into space! DRAMA!

"The direction away from the center of gravity of a planetary object. Did you skip that day in astronaut school?" Low budget educational straight-to-VHS movie about gravity and stuff?

"What isn't up, Andy? In this upside down world we live in are we really the capable of making judgments on matters we cannot fully understand? I thought you, my former roommate Arthur, of all people would understand that. How far we've fallen, Albert. How far we've fallen." << Clearly there's enough potential depth here to get a novel in the works. Does the astronaut have Alzheimer's? Does Alex have a plethora of alias? Commentary on the current state of humanity within the realm of the science fiction universe being presented where astronauts drive from their houses to launch sites on the day of takeoff? I could go on forever with potential plot direction on this one!

"I'm an astronaut and I'm going to space." << Yeah this one doesn't really make the story go anywhere.

"K-Far will not pick this response, knowing that he must pick something unexpected to beat people's opinion that he only picks boring responses." << Breaking the forth wall, EDGY.

Don't blame us for you lack of imagination and/or fear to take the story anywhere remotely interesting or fun.

Glorb · « **Reply #36 on:** July 06, 2009, 09:00:56 PM »

I'm assuming mysterious jars aren't interesting enough for this narrative.

TEM · « **Reply #37 on:** July 06, 2009, 09:04:17 PM »

Oops, missed one.

K-Far · « **Reply #38 on:** July 06, 2009, 11:58:13 PM »

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Black Mage · « **Reply #39 on:** July 07, 2009, 12:45:56 AM »

After realizing how ineffective my astronaut training appeared to be, I look back further into my past for guidance. I recall a time back in astronaut collage when I got into a scuffle over an article in the newspaper about planetary objects. Something about their gravity and its direction, but that's not important. What mattered was that I found myself going blow to blow with Abby. I relied on my astronaut training, and clenched my body as tight as humanly possible. This, unfortunately, proved to protect nothing and as Addison exchanged her final blow she knocked me into the shelves on the wall. As I hit the ground, I found myself surrounded by the remains of the shelf and the shards of the broken jars that once mysteriously sat upon them. Thinking back, perhaps Aaron was right... Maybe I didn't study enough. Alas, I can only believe in what I know, and as such, I further clench my muscles as tight as the most professional of astronauts.

CrossEyed7 · « **Reply #40 on:** July 07, 2009, 01:00:04 AM »

What he said.

Turtlekid1 · « **Reply #41 on:** July 07, 2009, 07:11:02 AM »

Quote from: K-Far on July 06, 2009, 11:58:13 PM

STFU, I'm Going somewhere with this.
I just want to get the petty little stuff out of the way as fast as possible so I can get to the real big plot twists.

If you're just looking to write a story, why not publish it in "Fan Creations" with chapters and structure?

If you really want an interactive story that leaves the actions of the character up to someone else, then you should probably be prepared to have the story go somewhere other than where you planned it to.

...just sayin'.

For story purposes:

Instead of clenching my body, which clearly isn't working, I loosen up and grab a beer from a convenient nearby fridge. I figure if I'm going to pass out, it might as well be because I'm drunk.

Glorb · « **Reply #42 on:** July 07, 2009, 08:33:30 AM »

I fight the irrestistable urge to pass out, and instead enter a state of super-awakeness.

TEM · « **Reply #43 on:** July 07, 2009, 09:44:07 AM »

I just pass out, I was feeling groggy from waking up so early and needed a nap anyway.

Rao · « **Reply #44 on:** July 07, 2009, 01:57:52 PM »

I start feeling sharp pains in my chest, I can't breathe. The stress is so severe that I go into a self-induced coma to prevent myself from surrendering to total insanity.