Shattered Glass.A Mario story

[Darkside]

 Okay here it goes.You can be whoever you want to be that's related in any way to Mario.The thing is,you're that charicter.The plot is that Bowser is destroying The Mushroom Kingdom.No ending it quickly.Please post.I never get feedback on the story board.
Thank you if you help.Oh yeh,I'm Geno.We will start when we get 2 other people.

Mario:Hey Zelda.
Zelda:I''ll be back.
Mario:Okay.
 Zelda walks off and turns into Shreik.
Shreik:You little.Stop flirting with Peach!
 Shreik mugs Mario for his wedding ring.

[TurtleTek]

( Not to burst your bubble, but I've noticed that stories like these where each person controls a character simply never work. It's too hard to work it out like that. It is best do to it in such a format that each author just picks up where the last one left off, and each author has complete control (within the boundries of a few rules). )



-TurtleTek
http://turtletek.botic.com