Oh yeah, are you ever gonna continue your story? It's good so far. As for ideas...I can't really help you there. They kind of have to be your OWN ideas. Besides, I squeeze all the "idea" juice I can for my own stories. It wouldn't be original if I helped you.
What generally works for me is to surround yourself with all different sorts of media. Watch TV, movies, read novels, play video games [ :) ], etc of different themes and styles. Well, I don't do that stuff JUST to get ideas; just pay attention more when you do. Also, try letting your mind wander before you go to sleep. My most creative ideas come from dreams.
I've started paying closer attention to the author's writing styles whenever I read a book. That's also helpful.
Other than that, this is about all the help I can give you. I'll be happy to proofread, though. :) Anyway, I hope you'll continue. It's got good potential. :)
PS--CH 14 is up in "The Prophecy" in case you didn't know yet. :)
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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.