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Author Topic: The Prophecy  (Read 65577 times)

Sapphira

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« Reply #135 on: July 08, 2003, 10:04:00 AM »
Yay! Thank you! Unfortunately, the stupid site hasn't updated it yet--I put chapter 4 up last night, and it STILL hasn't changed--same with your review--it's not up yet, either. :( Oh well. It said, "Any changes you make might not be immediately reflected on the site for up to 24 hours."

Anyway, thanks for reviewing it. ^_^

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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.

"The surest way to happiness is to lose yourself in a cause greater than yourself."

Insane Steve

  • Professional Cynic
« Reply #136 on: July 08, 2003, 04:22:00 PM »
*Pssssst* If you want more reviews, shorten your chapters to 2 paragraphs each! Most of the people on FF.net look at the first chapter and think "Man, this is long. I don't wanna read this." And then they don't, as they wouldn't know quality if it hit them upside the head. Of course, you DO realise this is sarcasm, right? Still...

And I'm NEVER going to Fanfiction.net. I some something on this site about a year ago from there that made me all sick inside and stuff. And that's hard to do, man. So ya.

Congratulations! You have just been blessed by the wisdom of Steve.

~I.S.~

Mario Maniac

  • Loose buttons
« Reply #137 on: July 21, 2003, 09:24:00 AM »
I remember what your talking about. I went to Fanfiction.net a year ago and accidentally found some disgusting pornography about Mario characters and Sonic characters... I don't even want to think about it...

People who like video games should also like Nintendo. People who don''t like Nintendo obviously don''t like video games.

People who like video games should also like Nintendo. People who don't like Nintendo obviously don't like video games.

Jman

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« Reply #138 on: July 21, 2003, 11:27:00 AM »
Whoever invented Porn should be dragged out into the street and shot.

The master of multiplayer Mario games: You''re looking at him right now!

I always figured "Time to tip the scales" was Wario's everyday motto.

Dr. Mario

« Reply #139 on: July 21, 2003, 12:29:00 PM »
This chapter is taking incredibly long to get posted.

Markio

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« Reply #140 on: July 21, 2003, 12:51:00 PM »
It took me about two hours to read the whole story, but it really is... too good for an adjective to describe it. I'm guessing that Peach is revived and Bowser is not the evil from the prophecy. I think it's funny when there's a sad part and Mario is referred to as the plumber. But anyway, its a really good story.

Act your age, not your I.Q.  Wait, what''s the difference?

"Hello Kitty is cool, but I like Keroppi the best."

Sapphira

  • Inquiring
« Reply #141 on: July 21, 2003, 12:51:00 PM »
Ack! Sorry, sorry, sorry! I know I haven't posted this in a while... uhh...Wow... I'm like a month and a half behind schedule! AHHHHHHHH!!! The truth is...well...I've been lazy...heheheh....

I'll try to finish the next chapter soon, really. I know you're all waiting...  *smiles, cringing...*

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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.

"The surest way to happiness is to lose yourself in a cause greater than yourself."

Sapphira

  • Inquiring
« Reply #142 on: July 21, 2003, 01:57:00 PM »
Whoa...simultaneous posts... FREAKY @_@

Anyway, thanks, Markio. I'm glad you like it. :)

"The surest way to happiness is to lose yourself in a cause greater than yourself."

jon

« Reply #143 on: July 21, 2003, 03:58:00 PM »
Why dont you just put the story in Gamers Haven??? Wouldnt that be better?

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Mario likes to dance in his backwards pants!

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Mario likes to dance in his backwards pants! Yay!

Sapphira

  • Inquiring
« Reply #144 on: July 21, 2003, 06:02:00 PM »
'Cuz I want to do both...er..all three. Here, for all you guys--my biggest supporters ^_^ , on FF.Net so it can be exposed to more readers, and on my own website--GH. It lets more people know when it's updated. Here I get comments from you guys, on FF.Net I get reviews from fellow writers and fanfic-lovers, and on GH it gives the site a more personal--and professional--touch--both at the same time. ;)

It's my story, and what I wish to do with it is my own choice. ;P

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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.

Edited by - Sapphira on 7/21/2003 5:03:10 PM

"The surest way to happiness is to lose yourself in a cause greater than yourself."

Dairy King

« Reply #145 on: July 21, 2003, 06:20:00 PM »
So... What's your excuse now?
*Please Post Next Chapter Soon!*
More shtick than you can shake a stick at.

Dr. Mario

« Reply #146 on: July 22, 2003, 08:41:00 AM »
  What are you waiting for???

 900th post!!!!  Words of Wisdom: Enemies are just friends in reverse.

Edited by - Dr. Mario on 7/22/2003 7:45:13 AM

Jman

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« Reply #147 on: July 23, 2003, 09:45:00 AM »
I like the part where Princess Daisy says: "Look at me, I'm crying. I never cry. What's wrong with me?"  (Way back in ch.2

The master of multiplayer Mario games: You''re looking at him right now!

I always figured "Time to tip the scales" was Wario's everyday motto.

Sapphira

  • Inquiring
« Reply #148 on: July 23, 2003, 10:16:00 AM »
Okay, okay, I know I'm behind, people, but there's no need to shout. :P

lol, Jman. That line was actually added JUST right before I posted it. I didn't want to make Daisy seem like a crybaby; she doesn't strike me to be that way. Plus, subtle humor never hurts... ;P

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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.

"The surest way to happiness is to lose yourself in a cause greater than yourself."

Jman

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« Reply #149 on: July 23, 2003, 11:21:00 AM »
Yeah, like, "What's that?"  "It's a person you idiot! Get him!"  Was that in the original manuscript?  


I really need to think up a subtle humor line for my sig.

I go through signatures like a fat guy goes through pants in a week.

I always figured "Time to tip the scales" was Wario's everyday motto.
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