Part 1
One day in the Mushroom Kingdom, Mario and Luigi got another personal invite to Princess Peach's castle. "Dear Mario, please come to my castle, the Toads and I baked a delicious mushroom cake for you. XOXOXO, Peach". And so, Mario scurried off to the castle, but Luigi, who always wants to go on adventures with Mario, wanted to come. "Hey, bro! Can I come too?" Mario thinks long and hard about it..."Hmm...OK!" And the Bros. were off to Princess Peach's castle. Along the way, Luigi is tackled to the ground by Daisy! Wooooo! They both crash to the ground. "Hi, Mario!" Daisy shouts. "I'm-a...I'm-a Luigi." "Oh.....I knew that! Ha ha! You're probably wondering why I'm out here, huh? Well, I'm not like other princesses who sit on their rumps all day waiting to be rescued! Woo! Anyway, I gotta run, there's a -- just then, a huge vine rushes out of the bushes and grabs Daisy! "Aah! Let me go!" It's Petey Piranha! And he's HUGE! "Mari -- oh, uh, Luigi! Help!" Daisy shouts as Luigi trembles in terror. Mario runs after Petey Piranha, but then he hurls an unavoidable sludge bomb at Mario. "Oof!" *Splat*. Mario's stuck to the wall. Petey chuckles and flies of with Daisy. "Mari -- dang it! Luigi! Save meeeeee!!!" Her cries fade. "Oh no, no, no, no! What do I do?!" Says Luigi. "Luigi!" Mario shouts. "Huh? Oh! Mario! Hang on, I'm-a-coming!" Luigi tries to pull Mario from the sticky sludge, but he won't budge. "Mama-mia, bro. You're really stuck!" Luigi says. "Luigi! Save-a-Daisy!" "But bro...what about you?" asks Luigi. "Go! I be fine!" Mario says. Luigi, worried and unsure runs off to rescue Princess Daisy. To Be Continued.
EDIT: This was all thrown together in one day (today). I know it might be a little sloppy but please, I want your honest feedback on the story so far.