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Dud Bomb
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October 15, 2005, 11:41:15 PM »
Mario luigi and Yoshi wre walking around yoshis island talking about there old adventure Peach was discusing a trade with the yoshi leader
Mario: remember when luigi was tryin to learn how to use the cape
mario and yoshi started lauthing hard
luigi: haha yep its real funy
yoshi: dam right it is
Mario: yep i never thought snaging your pants on the pole would be funny mr poke dot undys
mario and yoshi fell to the ground and started roling around
luigi:you will never act your age will you
Distent voice: mario!!!!!
Mario: whose that
Yoshi: oh no its tuk that yoshi is obsesd with you
Mario:grrreeeeaaat (roling his eyes)
tuk: i thought id never cach up(panting)
Mario: what do you want
Tuk: can i have your autorgraph
Mario: What ever
mario signs a picture of himself
Mario: there
luigi: we gotta go mario peach should be finished
Mario: ok see ya tuk
they start walkin away
tuk: wait
tuk runs infront of mario BANG a gun shot whent of
Yoshi:holy mackral is every one ok
Mario: im fine luigi
he could be seen wimpering behind the bush mario looket over where tuk whas standing and he was on the floor groining in pain blood coming out of his chest
Mario:holy [mackerel!] luigi get help
luigi ran as fast as he could to town yoshi was presing a his hands againt the wound
mario: keep puting presure thier
tuk:i think im gonna be ok it dosent hurt any more
tuk let out a gasp
mario: i havent got a pulse
yoshi: oh no
mario started doing CPR two medical toeds arrived at the seen in a ambulance
toed1: ok move
toed2: were goin to haf to air lift him the bulets in deep you two beter get out of here
yoshi: cmon mario let the medical people work
they arived at the mushroom kingdom hospatal yoshi had gone into the emergancy room he lied about being tuks father
luigi: hope hes goin to be ok
Mario:......
he was in deep thought clearly worried by the look on his face yoshi came through the door a dim look on his face
Yoshi: doc sais hes got a weak to live
Mario: WHAT!!!!
he stands up and kicks the char he was siting on
luigi hangd his head and coverd his eyes
A police oficer came in
Oficer:mario we need you at the station
Mario: WHY(still enraged)
oficer:just come alone
Mario: you two go to peach and explain whats hapining ill see you later
Luigi and Yoshi: ok
At the police station mario was speaking to the plice chief jef
jef: you need to see this
jef: handed him a bag with a bulet inside jef handed mario some gloves
jef: look at it
mario took the bulet out the bag and looket at it it had his name on it
mario: mumamia
jef: we sugest you stay home and stay indors
mario:ok
Mario was on the phone
mario: yes ill be ok peach...... no police are waching the house.......ill be ok......somhowe i dont think bowsers behind this........see ya
mario was taking a shower when a bang starteld him
Mario:whose thier
Mario put pants on(yes regular pants) and got his hammer from behind his couch
mario:whose thier
all of a suden somone jumpet out from his kichen door and slashet his chest with a knife mario ground in pain and wacket them with his hammer he looket at his chest it wasent bad he looket at the culprit it was a yoshi he ran out the door and into the night
to be contined
Mario runs jumps swims fly save peach and throw vegtables sooooo... wears the iron six pack
[Watch you exclamations. Even with asterisks.]
Edited by - Suffix on 10/16/2005 4:14:28 PM
Mario runs jumps swims fly save peach and throw vegtables sooooo... wears the iron six pack
HolyAarom
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October 16, 2005, 03:36:52 PM »
Your first part was decent. 7 out of 10.
However, I would like to put a suggestion.
-Check your grammer. (Spelling, puntuation, capitilization, etc.)
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