Author Topic: The Secret Of The Superstar (Read 2291 times)

Zachary · « **on:** February 21, 2005, 04:29:33 PM »

I Will Start this in awhile i've got homework.There it is \/ and this is my first story

Edited by - Zachary on 2/21/2005 4:23:55 PM

Zachary · « **Reply #1 on:** February 21, 2005, 05:57:33 PM »

Mario:(sleeping)
Luigi:Mario,Mario!
Mario:(wakes up)......

Luigi:Wake up, the princess has been stolen by who do you think?

Bowser flies in mario's house

Bowser:BOWSER OF COURSE!!!

Burns Luigi

luigi:help me mario!

mario:(sleeping)

Luigi:darn he's asleep!

bowser gets the burnt luigi and dissapears through mario's house's wall(!)and mario wakes up

Mario:What?Huh?hey!Give me back my brother!

tries to jump into the wall

Mario:(hits the wall)ow...
......
......
......
......
Mama-Mia

Falls to the ground

Ohhhhhhhh!Owwwwwwwww!Whhhhoooooooo

Faints

After 2 hours...

Mario:......whoa mama-mia

Mario:Luigi!

???:Yes your brother is about to get eaten by chain chomps

Mario:grrr!(punches ???)

???:Whoa stop punching me!(Gets some kind of laser and shoots mario)

Mario:Whoooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!(the laser blasts him through the wall just like bowser did)Now it-a works!

???:No i was aiming for the window!!

To Be Continued...

Edited by - Zachary on 2/21/2005 6:02:52 PM

Luigison · « **Reply #2 on:** February 21, 2005, 08:44:40 PM »

Welcome to the board. I found it interesting that your story and mine both started out with Luigi waking up Mario to tell him that someone is missing. I am not saying you saw or copied mine. Far from it. I just don't visit the Story Board often. This is the first time I have been here since August 2004, and I find a story that starts out similiar to the one and only one I posted. Strange.

Edited by - LuigisOn on 2/21/2005 6:46:01 PM

Zachary · « **Reply #3 on:** February 22, 2005, 04:11:40 PM »

I didn't copy you i've just ben here for 2 days and all my stories start out like that.

Luigison · « **Reply #4 on:** February 22, 2005, 06:09:20 PM »

I know you didn't, I just found it strange that they strated in about the same way. I wonder how many Mario stories start out with Luigi waking Mario up.

Zachary · « **Reply #5 on:** February 22, 2005, 06:34:38 PM »

Did you get the idea from paper mario2 because i did!

Zachary · « **Reply #6 on:** February 22, 2005, 06:34:46 PM »

Did you get the idea from paper mario2 because i did!

Luigi #98 · « **Reply #7 on:** February 25, 2005, 07:42:04 PM »

I'd say you got a good start