Ok I'm going to go ahead and post a small taste of the story (everything I have written thus far "not much!!") so here goes I would appreciate all criticism positive or negative in regards to this story.
Thanks alot!!
Tidbit
Dark, dank, dreary all of these words described his surroundings. What an awful day, he would never live this down. Aside from the fact that he had been careless enough to be captured, he now remembered that he had a "date" with Peach tonight. He glanced around, shackles lined the walls of the room, also there was a crack in the ceiling through which a single drop of water fell, constantly, to the floor. This plus his brother's increasingly loud snoring was driving him to the edge. Early that day Luigi had asked Mario to go for a walk with him. So off they went, Mushroom Way was the decided upon subject of today's sojourn. It was, decidedly, awe-inspiringly beautiful. Flowers were at the apex of their bloom, butterflies were at the height of their lives. Yes, this was a great idea. Or, it had been Mario thought glumly, right up untill.....
There I got it out I realize that this reeks of 'amateur' (I'm not even sure that's how you spell it.) but I figured I might as well contribute read away!!
Thanks alot!!
" I think therefore I am.... I think...."