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Author Topic: Super Mario world Deluxe  (Read 7601 times)

« Reply #15 on: June 11, 2002, 11:26:38 AM »
Tip for story boards: Don't add signatures.

Edited by - MadMario on 6/11/2002 1:19:51 PM
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« Reply #16 on: June 12, 2002, 07:46:06 PM »
(Setting:A dark room where a light is shineing on Bowser and is asking him questions)

Mario:So,Do you think smithy did this work.
Bowser:Maybe...
Mario:Do you like it?
Bowser:Nope.
Mario:When was the last time you saw yer castle?
Bowser:I walked out of the castle too go find Peach and then I heard a crash and I sensed that my castle broke!
Mario:How do you know it's true?
Bowser:Lets go over and *Sniffle* see.

Ash:
The Crazy Takes are comeing the crazy takes are comeing the crazy *Trips over*
Director:Soon...We Will Reveal...*Ash''s Pants fall down*
Mario:Ha ha ha ha!!!Mamma mia.
I need too get n one-a these shows...

« Reply #17 on: June 12, 2002, 08:06:44 PM »
Did you see the idea I deleted when I realized that only you should be writing this? Mario Maniac did that and Super Mario was angry at him for messing up his story and thought he'd have to start over.

And I suggested not to add signatures because they could get in the way in a story like The Longest Mario Story Ever. Doesn't apply to this story though, does it?

Anyway, keep up the great work!

Edited by - MadMario on 6/12/2002 7:07:46 PM
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The pen is mightier than the sword, unless the sword is in the hands of Lu Bu.

« Reply #18 on: June 14, 2002, 11:00:14 AM »
Ok...So,where did you post it?I never saw it.and was that idea here?if it wasn't,he doesn't get too tell you that it would ruin our story.If it was elsewhere  than don't blame me.My storys  are post free for anyone who wants tooo continue.And I am gunna keep my signature like this forever practically so you know the difference.


Ash:
The Crazy Takes are comeing the crazy takes are comeing the crazy *Trips over*
Director:Soon...We Will Reveal...*Ash''s Pants fall down*
Mario:Ha ha ha ha!!!Mamma mia.
I need too get n one-a these shows...

Edited by - Bob the spiny Parakoopa on 6/14/2002 10:04:10 AM

« Reply #19 on: June 14, 2002, 11:13:18 AM »
It had to do with the battle against Eixor in Super Mario RPG. It was in this thread, but your last post about this story took place before my story post; therefore, this story would be messed up, since I posted mine before you posted yours. Did you notice that my "tip" was edited? That's where my post was. Ah, what does it matter now?
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« Reply #20 on: June 17, 2002, 09:45:20 AM »
HHmmm...
Very strange...
Well,Theres nothing we can do about it,so lets go too the story again.

Bowser:See?*Sob*my castles ruined!!!!
Mario:Ah...Very well,lets look inside and see if there are any clues that will help us know who did it.
Bob:Why go in there? it'll take way too long too search the whole castle...
Luigi:Would you do it for a scoo-WHAT AM I SAYING?!?!?
Bowser:Shut up and lets go see,with my Bowser
moniter!Hold on tight!*They blast off into a window and they're inside a room with abunch of tvs on the wall that detect things in the camera.*
Bob:Ninty nine box's of tv's on the wall,
ninty nine boxs of tv's!
Take one down,scrunch it around,ninty eight box's of tv's on the wall!
Luigi:?Be quite.
Bob:Sure.
Bowser:LOOK!!!!!12 footprints!
Mario:two look like robots,too look like tennis shoes,two are different...
Could this be...

To be continued...



Ash:
The Crazy Takes are comeing the crazy takes are comeing the crazy *Trips over*
Director:Soon...We Will Reveal...*Ash''s Pants fall down*
Mario:Ha ha ha ha!!!Mamma mia.
I need too get n one-a these shows...

« Reply #21 on: June 17, 2002, 10:38:21 AM »
Okay, let's see...two robots, two tennis shoes, and two that would make you say, "What the...?" Oh! I got it! Is it the people from Sonic Adventure 2 Battle?

By the way, who are the crazy takes?
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« Reply #22 on: June 17, 2002, 05:17:06 PM »
Yup.Ding Ding Ding Ding!We've got a winner!

Mario:So it's Sonic,Tails,Knuckles,Shadow,Dr.Robotnic and Rouge who did it!!!
Luigi:We'll go tell them that we know it was them.Wait a sec.They wouldn't do that!And,Giant footprints of a dinasuar or something...Biolizard must of chased them!

« Reply #23 on: June 18, 2002, 10:22:21 AM »
Bob: Biolizard?
Mario: Save it for later, we've got to chase some Hedgehogs!
Luigi: Uh-huh!
Bowser: Wait till I find them... I'll gring them to bits!
*They follow the footprints and they lead to outside*
Mario: The trail ends here, what do we do now?
Bob: Play Mario Monopoly!
Mario: NO!
*Then, they hear a giggle*
Luigi: What was that?
Mario: I don't know...
*More giggles and snickers*
Bob: What is it?
*Footsteps*
Bowser: Wha-?
*Dirt starts to fly and metal clanks*
Mario: RUNNNNN!!!!
Sonic, Shadow, Rouge, Knuckles, Dr. Eggman, and Tails: Grarrrrrr!!!!!!!
Mario: ???
Knuckles: EUREKA!!!
Rouge: What?
Knuckles: *taunting* I found jewels! I found jewels. I found- oof!
Rouge: Give me them!
Eggman: *Shoots out rodotic arms and grabs the treasure* Noooo, they're my emer- HEY!
*Tails takes and flies away*
Tails: Yeee-heee!
Shadow: Heh, heh, heh. Treasure. Must have! *Jumps up and grabs the jewels*
Tail: I've got them, I've got them! It's my Birthday, it's my birthday! I've got them, I- *Looks at his hands* -don't have them.
Shadow: Yessss!!!! Emerald Power!
*Charges up*
Sonic: Oh, no you're not *Spindashes into him and the emerald is flung to Mario*
The SA2:B Crew: Uh-oh...

Continue please!

An extremly rare and valuable Yoshi!
"Who want''''s to buy a gold Yoshi? Selling Price, $99,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999!" (almost 10 Googols!)
(This is GoldenYoshi)
"How much does the $1.99 Popcorn Chicken cost?" ~ Classic Stupidity.

« Reply #24 on: June 18, 2002, 07:22:16 PM »
Mario:Why did your brake poor bowser's castle?Tell us,Or else!*Holds up the emerald in fornt of Sonic's face*
Sonic:We were chased by biolizard into here!
Mario:Was this one of those "Were not getting enough sales" things again?
Sonic:NO!
Shadow:Believe us!
Rouge:Please!
Tails:Wake up and smell the coffee,he believes us!
Knuckles:What coffee?
Tails:*Sigh*He'll never learn...
Mario:Are we supposed too team up with you guys too go defeat Biolizard?
Sonic:Yup.
Mario:And all of you guys want too be the hero/the one who saves the day so you're fighting over that emerald?
Sonic:Yes...Correction,I am SUPPOSED too save the day!
Shadow:No,I'm gunna conker it!
Tails:Shut up,Sonic's shadow!
Dr.Robotnic:Shut yer ??©?¥????? you buthead!
Knuckles:That's Tail's  Prower you dimwit!
Rouge:Oh no,YOU'RE the dimwit!
Mario:Will you all Shut Up?
Rouge:Stay out of it,Plumper poop!
Luigi:NEVER INSULT MY BRO!
Knuckles:Shut yer ??????m you old koot!
Bob:There's no use in even trying...
Sonic:Will you just SHUT UP?
Bob:sorry...
Bowser:Heh heh heh heh...*Flames them*
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Mario:I see...HOTT!!!HOT!!!Little birdys flying around the triforce...

« Reply #25 on: June 20, 2002, 11:12:13 AM »
*They hear a loud roar*
Luigi: Huh?
Bowser: Is it?
Luigi: Yep.
Bob: BIOLIZARD!!!
Mario: Bio..... wizard? Tell...him...to...give...up the...wand.
Tails: No, Bio-LIZARD!
Mario: Bio-degradable?
Bob: Noooo, BioLizard!
Mario: *Shakes his head* Ohhhhhh. Biolizard! Let's get him!
Bowser: Let's tear him limb from limb!
Knuckles: But he's not a tree.
Tails: Tsk, tsk, tsk. You'll never get will you? These are Metaphors and Idioms, Idiot!
*They all run off to fight the lizard*
(Co-Author's note: Who is Biolizard, Bob the Spiny Parakoopa?)

Mario: Yarrrrrr!!!!!
Luigi: Kwahhhhhhhh!!!!!
Bowser: Graaaaaaaaaa!!!!
Bob: Ha-hee!!
Sonic and Tails: Let's do it!
Knuckles and Rouge: Finish it!
Eggman and Shadow: Beat it up!

Biolizard: sssssssss.... Yah! *spits his tounge out, which scatters poisonous balls of liquid all over*
Mario: Oh shoot.
Luigi: I'll take care of him. *Does his super jump from SMB 2 and punches The lizard*
Bob: I'll do a Flying Flame Shell! *flies into the air and turns into a flaming shell*
Biolizard: ouch!
Tails: Spin dash, Sonic and Shadow! Fire, Eggman! Punch and kick, Knuckles and Rouge! I'll do a Flying tail whip... *They fire off and Biolizard falls towards them*
Mario: Yahoo!
Biolizard: Heh, heh. Lizard Lick!
*he licks up everyone but Bowser*
Bowser: Now's my chance... KAME, KAME!!!! *A bunch of Koopas and Lakitus come and attack the liazrd and free everyone*
(Co-Authors note: Get it? Kame means Turtle in Japanese.)
*Biolizard dissappears and the liquid is gone*
SA2B Gang: Thank you! Later! *They disapear back to their own universe*
*They hear a voice crying out*
Mario: What is it?
Luigi: Let's see.
*They walk over to find Peach*
Peach: Thank you, Guys! Huh, *rubs her eyes* BOWSER?!
Mario: Don't worry, he saved us.
Luigi: To make things easier, we'll teleport him back to the Keep *They  teleport Bowser*
Peach: Let's go home.
*They return to Peach's castle to celebrate*
Peach: Wow! An untouched chocolate cake! How'd you... what...
Mario: We made it before we rescued you and teleported it back here for safe-keeping.
Peach: No, I meant that the Toads didn't snack on it!
Bob: Let's eat!
Peach: No, I hate chocolate!
Luigi, Mario, and Bob: WHAT?!?!?!?!?
Peach: Just kidding. Let's eat!
*They party and eat and TMK is safe at last*


THE END!!!

An extremly rare and valuable Yoshi!
"Who want''''s to buy a gold Yoshi? Selling Price, $99,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999!" (almost 10 Googols!)
(This is GoldenYoshi)
"How much does the $1.99 Popcorn Chicken cost?" ~ Classic Stupidity.

« Reply #26 on: June 20, 2002, 11:14:07 AM »
About MadMario's "deleted" idea:

Bob would be mad if I messed up his stories! He even said that I'm his co-writer thingie-ma-jigger! Read the info before you post!

An extremly rare and valuable Yoshi!
"Who want''''s to buy a gold Yoshi? Selling Price, $99,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999!" (almost 10 Googols!)
(This is GoldenYoshi)
"How much does the $1.99 Popcorn Chicken cost?" ~ Classic Stupidity.

« Reply #27 on: June 20, 2002, 11:22:37 AM »
Free-For-everyone-I-said.

By the way,I'm not sure who biolizard is,
But its the whole SA2B gangs enemy,I think I heard Paper Mario talking about him in Sonic adventure 2 battle(The thread,I mean)
Looks like i'm makeing another story...
Hmm...Super Mario Bros...6?
Nahh...

« Reply #28 on: July 06, 2002, 05:30:59 PM »
Yoshi, you had the ok to continue it, I didn't. Beside's that, I didn't know Bob wouldn't mind if I continued it for him.

Also, about Mario Maniac, he just said "let me continue it for you" and continued it until Super Mario yelled at him.

Maybe I'll check how Super Mario is doing.
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« Reply #29 on: July 08, 2002, 04:59:08 PM »
Well,you can't barge in or,well I think the problem was all of that blood....

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