While I'm working on that, I'll ditch the thick outlines. And I'll color the outlines to match up with what they're outlining. Yeah! And I'll get really into shading and making it look more 3-D! Oh man! And I'll use lots of brown and gray! And lens flares! Hoo! And I'll quit with the spotty floors!
No, better! I'll start making sprite comics! Everything will look perfect!
Edit: Yahhhh, sorry. I mean, constructive criticism is good and it'd be cool to have, but what I want is more of... "The guy on the left in the first panel is all awkward-looking," because that's more of a mistake than an intentional style element...