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Forum Games / Re: A Mario Story: Add 5 words to the tale...
« on: April 29, 2003, 05:25:40 PM »
by lighting himself on fire...

Spill the blood of the innocent!!! Then clean it before it makes a mess!

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Forum Games / Re: A Mario Story: Add 5 words to the tale...
« on: April 29, 2003, 05:25:17 PM »
by lighting himself on fire...

Spill the blood of the innocent!!! Then clean it before it makes a mess!

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Fan Creations / Re: The Hero's Blood
« on: April 29, 2003, 04:54:25 PM »
Sorry everybody, my life got busy and I will try to get chapter two up tonight.  After you read it, if you feel like it, tell me what you liked or didn't like or what you think will happen. I would rather get 10 people telling me their opinions and clogging up my topic than nobody posting, and leaving me to wonder what everyone thinks. Sorry for delays, must... keep... tying... story!

Spill the blood of the innocent!!! Then clean it before it makes a mess!

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Forum Games / Re: Partial Sentence Story
« on: April 29, 2003, 04:36:30 PM »
that they did not have enough money to get in to the zoo, and they began to cry. Mario gobbled them down, then exclaimed...

(I love this topic, its so much fun!)

Spill the blood of the innocent!!! Then clean it before it makes a mess!

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Forum Games / Re: A Mario Story: Add 5 words to the tale...
« on: April 29, 2003, 01:41:39 PM »
which causes his pants to drop.
(6 words in a 5 word post, I'm pure evil >:D )

Spill the blood of the innocent!!! Then clean it before it makes a mess!

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Forum Games / Re: Partial Sentence Story
« on: April 29, 2003, 01:16:33 PM »
then re-materialized back on Mario's body. The magi-koopa who made Bowser feel more alive re-appered and revived Peach, who then yelled...

Spill the blood of the innocent!!! Then clean it before it makes a mess!

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Fan Creations / Re: The Prophecy
« on: April 28, 2003, 08:47:00 PM »
I guess I can wait until your chapter is revised(*long sigh*). Revising is what takes up most of my writing time. I just hope when my story picks up everyone will probably stop wondering " Hey, this ain't a dark and gritty story, what gives." It gets kinda emotional and sometimes my eyes will water, 'cause its really sad. ARRG! MUST... STOP... RAMBLING! sorry.

Spill the blood of the innocent!!! Then clean it before it makes a mess!


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Fan Creations / Re: The Hero's Blood
« on: April 28, 2003, 12:33:39 PM »
Thanks to everybody for reading so far. I know the first couple of chapters are a little short, but the later chapters are more lenghty because there will be more dialouge and action. I tried to work on this more yesterday but that stupid amp I was putting in my car caused us problems all day long. Ugg. I doubt I'll get to post chapter 2 tonight( Ahhh, too many to's in one sentence) but I will most definently tomorrow.

...and if you read this Sapphira, please know that I am dying to read your next chapter. ^_^

Spill the blood of the innocent!!! Then clean it before it makes a mess!

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Fan Creations / Re: The Hero's Blood
« on: April 27, 2003, 12:51:37 PM »
Okee Dokee everybody, since everbody so far has showed support and interest, I am more than thrilled to post. I just wish I could retype my handwriting faster.
Ch 1
The Invitation
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    Luigi rose from his bed around sunrise being unable to sleep. His dream still playing over and over in his head. He made himself a cup of herbal tea to sip while watching the sunrise. This was one of his favorite moments of the day. From the kitchen window, you could see the sun cast an orange glow around Peach’s castle, then slowly rise over the castle wall to shine its light across the rest of the Mushroom Kingdom.*What a beautiful day it will be.* he thought smiling.
     After the sun had risen, Luigi started to make breakfast.* I wish for once Mario could wake up early enough to help.* He was always the clean one of the brothers. His things were always neat and organized and Mario’s were usually more or less tossed about the house in small piles. *Oh goody, more to clean up*. About this time he heard Mario coming down the stairs.” Good morning Mario, it sure is a nice day, isn’t it?” Luigi waited for response. “ Huh, oh yeah, good morning.” Mario yawned back.
   There was a knock at the door.” Oh boy, can I get it please?” Luigi sarcastically muttered as he opened the door, to find Peach sanding on the front step.
“ Good morning Luigi.”
“Good morning Peach.”
“Peach?” Mario’s ears perked up at the sound of  her name.
He dashed for the doorway nearly knocking Luigi down in the process.
    “Hi Peach!” Mario cheerfully said, sliding to a stop beside Luigi, “You look beautiful as always this morning.” he said gazing into her soft, blue eyes.
    “ Thank you.” she replied, blushing slightly. For a moment they just stood there,they were completely entranced by one another, as if everything else disappeared and they were the only two people in the universe. They were in love, they were happy, and that was all that mattered.
   â€œSo what brings you here?” Luigi asked,  feeling a little left out.
   â€œOh yeah, I almost forgot why I came. I’m having a party this evening to watch tonight’s meteor shower, and I came by to drop off  an invitation for you guys.”
    “We’ll be there Peach, it’ll be great!”
    “You will? Oh Mario, you’re so sweet. Well, I’ll see you tonight.” She gave Mario a little peck on the cheek causing him to blush, waved to Luigi, and was on her way.
    Luigi thought about telling Mario about his dream, but Mario was too excited to listen” I’m gonna get ready right now!” Mario dashed up the stairs to get changed.
    *I’ll just wait until tomorrow to tell him. I don’t want to spoil his day.*  Luigi thought to himself returning to breakfast. He had forgotten about the dream and was thinking about the party. He hoped that Daisy would be there. He smiled as he thought about her. Many times he had talked with her and always had a wonderful time. She had a certain aura of inocence and kindness that he found irresistible He often wanted to express his feelings about her, but he never could build up the courage to do so.* Hopefully I can have the courage tonight.*

Stay tuned for Ch 2 to becoming soon. I'll try to post it as quickly as possible, but I may be limited by work and sleep, if only I could win the lottery.


Spill the blood of the innocent!!! Then clean it before it makes a mess!

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Forum Games / Re: A Mario Story: You add ONE sentence to the tale
« on: April 27, 2003, 11:26:12 AM »
Oops, double post. Its just not as good as double cheese on a pizza is it?

Spill the blood of the innocent!!! Then clean it before it makes a mess!

Edited by - Bluto on 4/27/2003 10:29:57 AM

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Forum Games / Re: A Mario Story: You add ONE sentence to the tale
« on: April 27, 2003, 11:26:02 AM »
My big problem is when I type I'll get ahead of myself or switch letters around. Last night I kept spelling "blood" like this "blodd" and Luigi like Lugig, but I think we're gettin' off of the topic so: Mario left the classroom he had been in for the last couple posts and decided to film a movie.

Spill the blood of the innocent!!! Then clean it before it makes a mess!

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Fan Creations / Re: The Hero's Blood
« on: April 27, 2003, 11:04:10 AM »
*Squeels in delight* Yes! People like it!, I try to post at least Ch 1 today, my whole family get together on Sundays and me and my older brother usually do something to our cars. Today's task is hook up an Amp and maybe tint the windows(which will make me feel cool ^_^!) Sorry, I was rambling again, so anyhoo, thanks for your support! More to come soon!


Spill the blood of the innocent!!! Then clean it before it makes a mess!

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General Chat / Re: Hi 'm a Newbie
« on: April 27, 2003, 12:53:49 AM »
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....(really long uhhh for this one) I think that the people with a really high number of posts claiming to be "Newbies" were just joking, but you may not have understood that because the sound of the jokes zooming right past you must have distracted you. Now please don't be mad, its rare that I get an opportunity to do something like that.

Spill the blood of the innocent!!! Then clean it before it makes a mess!

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Forum Games / Re: Partial Sentence Story
« on: April 27, 2003, 12:41:58 AM »
wondered why it was necessary since Bowser wasn't dead. Feeling more alive than ever, Bowser gave back Peach's crown and skipped away singing....

I''m not lazy, I''m just... uh...

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Fan Creations / Re: The Hero's Blood
« on: April 27, 2003, 12:35:18 AM »
Yay! My first reply, Now I'll try to be as cosistant as possible with posting but it might be a few days between postings because I have a job and a serious relationship with the most beautiful person in the world( to me anyways), so anyways, I have decided to do some dedications.

To Crystal: For being supportive and putting up with me.

To Dairy King: For pointing out every grammatical mistake I make.

To Sapphira: For inspiring me to finish this story and for giving me the courage(EEK!) to post it.

To Hirocon: For being the first to reply to my topic.

Uhhhh... thats all for now.
More posting soon, I hope.^_^

I''m not lazy, I''m just... uh...

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