Author Topic: Supah Dupah Mario bros. the comic (Read 4729 times)

Kooky · « **on:** August 29, 2004, 03:16:42 AM »

Raccoon Sam · « **Reply #1 on:** August 29, 2004, 12:58:08 PM »

*Cough Cough Hack Hack Hackity Hack Hack* ...Ahem...
Umm... Pretty Good...
Mmmh...
*grumble*

Yoshi zero · « **Reply #2 on:** August 29, 2004, 01:58:01 PM »

Honestly, I didn't like them, but its just my opinion.

There is, indeed, a lot of swearing, but I'll leave the moderating to the moderators.

Raccoon Sam · « **Reply #3 on:** August 29, 2004, 11:02:48 PM »

I'm making a mario comic too: Super Mario Bros: Return To Mushroom Kingdom.but it's finnish.
I think i Make English version someday.
It's like a Beautiful day in mushroom kingdom...
That's what they thought... (Bowser in clowncopter At the Background)
Mario walks; "Dum,da dee da, dum... Mamma mia!"
(Toad is hurt and under 6 bricks and a broken BUllet bill Machine)
"What happened?"
"*Cough* H-he At-attacked without a warning"
Mario walks to peaches castle.
"Oh No..."
(All toads are dead At Castle grounds)
"All Dead..."

·Meanwhile at Bowser's keep·

(Bowser Is In Front Of An Army)
"Friends! Our First Attack Was Succesful, Tomorrow we Attack To Mushroom Way and To Mushroom castle,Then...We Kidnap The Princess..."
(Koopa Troopa Jumps Up:)
"What About Mario And Luigi?"
"They Can't stop Us..."
"Huh?"
(Something Walks from the shadows:)
"They just can't..."

·Back to Mushroom kingdom·

"No! They're all dead!!!"
"Yes Mario,That's Why we're going to Bowser's Keep"
"Huh? Luigi?!"
"Yes,Now Let's Go."
"But Toad,And Toadette and..."
"There's No Time!"
"..."
(They Take cape feathers from their pockets)

And Fly towards The bowser's Keep.....

That's All You can get.

Red Paratroopa · « **Reply #4 on:** August 30, 2004, 05:21:49 PM »

Pure hilarity!

"I''m a stupid fatty who swings his arms from side to side and pushes a button to receive bacon. The universe is permeated with the odor of Shawne Vinson. Does that make me a nut?"- DotheLizardkoopaChupVinsonluigi

Kooky · « **Reply #5 on:** August 31, 2004, 10:53:49 AM »

Thanks guys. And yes there's alot of swearings, but i don't think that's a prob for me at these forums, cuz i didn't swear here.

lazermario · « **Reply #6 on:** September 01, 2004, 02:51:07 PM »

No, too many fanfics of Mario (Including my Mario Brothers & the Mushroom Mafia) start out with "it's a beautiful day" kinda stuff. How about:

"It was an ugly day in the Mushroom Kingdom. None of the mushroom people had bathed in weeks and there was the odor of mold everywhere..."

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"Some stories are invented entirely on the pretense of mocking others."
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TAYL: Talk At Ya Later
Lazer Mario

Kooky · « **Reply #7 on:** September 02, 2004, 01:23:34 PM »

That would be a good idea, but meh, the first parts were my first comics

TEM · « **Reply #8 on:** September 02, 2004, 02:15:36 PM »

The saying goes, "If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all."
So, no comment.

.tneb ytilaeR dna dewols emiT
.tnew namggE eht no dna no tuB