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« Reply #1710 on: May 22, 2003, 03:05:53 PM »
Why would I lie? Really the only thing I did was a beastility...just kidding I dont even know what that is...but anyway the only thing I have done is hold hands....Hopefully (for me) that will change soon....... Ill have to take it over again if it does...Now, what have you done that your so...filthy as you say? The worst thing I called someone was a Hypocrite, The most interesting thing I did was I found my GF. That story I hope to post here sometime, its actually quite interesting..

It‘s-a me, Marionut#1!

Edited by - marionut#1 on 5/22/2003 2:28:39 PM
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Sapphira

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« Reply #1711 on: May 22, 2003, 05:17:20 PM »
Let's see...
-I've eaten food that I've dropped (in my house--5 second rule. :) )
-I've lied (when I was younger--but then again what little kid HASN'T lied. Hmmm...should I omit that question? I haven't lied since I was like 8.)
-I've jay-walked (against my will--I was 8 and my parents wanted to take a "short-cut", despite my nagging against breaking a law. Heheh...I chewed their ear off on that one. :) )
-Violently pushed someone (my brother; that's it.)
-I might have laughed at a racist joke. Not sure though. If I did, I felt terrible while I was laughing.
-meanest word: satan-woshipper (my brother, once again)
-And the most interesting thing I've done is really...quite gross. I was 8 and very strange. That's all I can say...

Hmm...I guess I was worst at age 8. :)
...And I just defended all of my answers. ...Except the last.


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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.
"The surest way to happiness is to lose yourself in a cause greater than yourself."

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« Reply #1712 on: May 22, 2003, 06:06:08 PM »
Oh, and guys, I think it meant by most interesting is the most interesting SICK or BAD thing you've done. (i.e eaten an insect, urinated in a water gun and squirted it at someone (that's my bro's, btw), ripped pages from a school book, mooned someone, frenched a tree, put makeup on a sleeping person, stolen candy from a baby, falsely screamed bloody murder, deficated in the ocean, etc.) Wow...I have a creative mind for thinking up all that as I went along.)

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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.

Edited by - Sapphira on 5/22/2003 5:16:55 PM
"The surest way to happiness is to lose yourself in a cause greater than yourself."

Sapphira

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« Reply #1713 on: May 22, 2003, 06:49:29 PM »
*Sigh* All right Marionut (and Insane Steve), I'll give a tiny bit of info on my new story.
Part 1 is called "Churning Waters," if that says anything. Well too bad, that's all *I'm* going to say for now. (The reason the actual complete story isn't named yet is 'cuz I ALWAYS have to think of a title AFTER it's been completed, to see how perfectly I can get it to fit the story. Hence why Part 1 is already named.)

And no, I'm not posting it, so don't bug me anymore. :)

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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.
"The surest way to happiness is to lose yourself in a cause greater than yourself."

« Reply #1714 on: May 22, 2003, 08:09:56 PM »
actually what I meant was if you could do just what you did when you posted The Prophecy. give us what would be written on the back of the book. I mean, you dont have to post it all, just maybe a synopsis... but thats alright if you dont want to.....but if you do that, I might post my strange, interesting, and unbelievable GF story.........

It‘s-a me, Marionut#1!

Edited by - marionut#1 on 5/22/2003 7:12:31 PM
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« Reply #1715 on: May 22, 2003, 08:38:39 PM »
Actually, I wrote a little synopsis for it, but I have to revise it. It's worded kinda funny, and I'm too lazy to do that right now. Plus, I'm afraid it'll make you more intrigued... Which I think I already did by just saying that. Ah well. We shall see.

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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.
"The surest way to happiness is to lose yourself in a cause greater than yourself."

« Reply #1716 on: May 22, 2003, 08:41:51 PM »
Dont worry. The Prophecy will keep me occupied, once I find out the synopsis.....

It‘s-a me, Marionut#1!
It's-a me, Marionut#1!

Insane Steve

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« Reply #1717 on: May 22, 2003, 08:54:49 PM »
Yes... all your are over 90% pure? Man, I'm "only" 75%... at age 16. The worst word I've ever called anyone would be filtered on these forums in at least 2 spots, and the most interesting thing... erm... I don't remember what I put. I think I left it blank due to my impatience.

I can't remember eveything that caused me to lose percents.

And come on! I mean, as I once said, I am offended by nothing. So, when it's done (300 pages... man, that's long) post it... I mean, i'm sure eveyone would love to read it.

Congratulations! You have just been blessed by the wisdom of Steve.
~I.S.~

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« Reply #1718 on: May 22, 2003, 09:08:09 PM »
...I don't think so...
Hmm...Since you said you're offended by nothing and you're less pure than these lousy, purer-than-me others (no offense; I'm envious :) ), I may email you the first chapter or 2 (only 2 are edited and revised completely).

Remember saying, "You took the undiluted, overly corrosive satirical style I usually use and diluted it for safe usage... that is, so it doesn't burn a hole through everything it touches."  --Well this one is like this--undiluted. That's why I don't wanna post it.

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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.
"The surest way to happiness is to lose yourself in a cause greater than yourself."

Insane Steve

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« Reply #1719 on: May 22, 2003, 09:17:42 PM »
Yes, if I showed my true, unleashed writing style, you wouldn't like it I don't think, as it is VERY caustic and there is swearing roughly every sentence. And it's not much like Mario. Actually, I'm kind of glad that the check is put on my style, as it allows me to show "better" thoughts that are more like "Mario" than my normal style.

And ya, I say E-mail it. When it's done, of course.

And the plot of my new story isn't close to being complete enough to write anything yet... here is MY plot progress on a typical story:

1: Create VERY basic plot. Such as, what characters, what major events occur, the main problem, and how is it resolved. Honestly, I don't even have the last thing in the list thought of yet.

2. Fine tune plot to make it make sense.

3. Elaborate on the beginning and ending.

4. Add little subtlies and humor.

5. Actually begin writng. When I write a manuscript, I honestly don't write in NEARLY as much detail as I type it up on the forum. That, and you can't read it anyways... it's that illegible.

6. Make last-minute changes to make it more appealing to the reader. (The written manuscript's ending of The Third Attempt is radically different from what I posted. I'd post everything I added and changed from the written part, but I don't think anyone cares. So I won't unless someone gives me a reason to.)

So yea. This one will only have one semi-major original character (An evil character this time.) ... so i will eventually get to all Mario characters. Someday.

Congratulations! You have just been blessed by the wisdom of Steve.
~I.S.~

Sapphira

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« Reply #1720 on: May 22, 2003, 09:33:59 PM »
I'm glad your corrosive style has changed, then. As I've mentioned several times here (including a few posts ago), profanity is one of my greatest pet peeves. I can deal with it every once in a while, but if it gets too be what I feel is too much, I can't take it anymore and just stop reading/watching.

*Worst book I EVER had to read in school: "The Catcher in the Rye."* (...Crud. I'm gonna have to re-read it, since I have to repeat this year. Ah well, I've already read it once, so I can just use SparkNotes to refresh mt memory.) Seriously, I hated that book so much and couldn't take all the language (the main character has some SERIOUS problems. Heh. Then again, he's put in a mental institute), that I ACTUALLY had to have my PARENTS switch off and read it TO ME!! Miss Devour-a-novel-in-one-day! Gah!! I've never actually HATED a book before, but, as you can see, this one made me mad.

*Pant pant* Sorry... </rant>

Anyway, just forget I ever mentioned this 2nd fanfic of mind. (Of mine,) let's just focus on "The Prophecy" for now.

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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.
"The surest way to happiness is to lose yourself in a cause greater than yourself."

« Reply #1721 on: May 22, 2003, 09:38:48 PM »
Could you please email it to me? I dont get offended easily either, and besides, how could I be your #1 fan if I didnt get a copy....and I DID help you find the secret page........

It‘s-a me, Marionut#1!

Edited by - marionut#1 on 5/22/2003 9:10:22 PM
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« Reply #1722 on: May 22, 2003, 09:46:40 PM »
*cringes, thinking*  I'd really rather not. It's quite...disturbing. You said you're not easily offended, but you have no idea how...wrong...this story is... I wish I could tell you, but... Ugh...I just dunno...

Anyway, as I said, let's drop this story for a while. Mm-kay? My main focus right now is "The Prophecy," and I really don't wanna think about this other one right now.

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Deep inside us all is a little green elf telling us to burn things.
"The surest way to happiness is to lose yourself in a cause greater than yourself."

« Reply #1723 on: May 22, 2003, 09:51:39 PM »
Heck, this whole world is wrong...believe me, nothing offends me. Im actually a WWII historian. Ive actually watched war footage with guys being blown up right in front of me. Nothing will offend me, I assure you. Well that the last thing I will say about it..for now...BWAHAHAHAHAHa  just kidding.

It‘s-a me, Marionut#1!

Edited by - marionut#1 on 5/22/2003 9:09:38 PM
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« Reply #1724 on: May 22, 2003, 10:21:14 PM »
I have two brothers.

For the "most interesting thing I've ever done," I said, "lived." Rather broad, but also quite true.

And I really don't wanna hear any more about that ...other story.
That was a joke.

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