Yes, if I showed my true, unleashed writing style, you wouldn't like it I don't think, as it is VERY caustic and there is swearing roughly every sentence. And it's not much like Mario. Actually, I'm kind of glad that the check is put on my style, as it allows me to show "better" thoughts that are more like "Mario" than my normal style.
And ya, I say E-mail it. When it's done, of course.
And the plot of my new story isn't close to being complete enough to write anything yet... here is MY plot progress on a typical story:
1: Create VERY basic plot. Such as, what characters, what major events occur, the main problem, and how is it resolved. Honestly, I don't even have the last thing in the list thought of yet.
2. Fine tune plot to make it make sense.
3. Elaborate on the beginning and ending.
4. Add little subtlies and humor.
5. Actually begin writng. When I write a manuscript, I honestly don't write in NEARLY as much detail as I type it up on the forum. That, and you can't read it anyways... it's that illegible.
6. Make last-minute changes to make it more appealing to the reader. (The written manuscript's ending of The Third Attempt is radically different from what I posted. I'd post everything I added and changed from the written part, but I don't think anyone cares. So I won't unless someone gives me a reason to.)
So yea. This one will only have one semi-major original character (An evil character this time.) ... so i will eventually get to all Mario characters. Someday.
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