Author Topic: haiku story (Read 4360 times)

Screech · « **on:** July 21, 2002, 07:18:48 PM »

Allright. Time to add another to the huge number of unfinished stories I'm currently writing.
In this one, I'll write the first part of it and then someone else will continue, where I left off, and so on. But the twist is, all dialogue(talking) has to be written as a haiku.

Mario walked into his house."Luigi, we are
invited to the castle
For cake and tea." he said.

I think I did that right. If I didn't, could someone please tell me.

If it cannot break out of it's shell, the chick will die without being born. We are the chicken. The world is our egg. Smash the world shell! For the revolution of the world!-the student council, "Utena Revolutionary Girl"

Chupperson Weird · « **Reply #1 on:** January 10, 2003, 12:42:36 AM »

Now THIS was cool. I don't see why it didn't catch on.

Screech · « **Reply #2 on:** January 10, 2003, 05:20:25 PM »

funny. I thought I wrote this before my "Utena" sig.

You can continue it if you want.

The world would be a much cleaner place if people would eat their own trash.

Chupperson Weird · « **Reply #3 on:** January 11, 2003, 12:01:41 AM »

"We'd better hurry to the
castle before we
get hit by a truck," said Jim.

Sorry, it was all I could come up with.

NintendoExpert89 · « **Reply #4 on:** December 27, 2003, 02:19:44 PM »

Oh my God, I revived this poor, defenseless topic from entering the gates of oblivion!

Suddenly, a mad Chain Chomp
appeared in a frantic
and Mario had vanished.

Mmmm, good white, hearty, white beard for white, white people!

Edited by - nintendoexpert89 on 12/27/2003 12:21:56 PM

Markio · « **Reply #5 on:** December 27, 2003, 03:11:46 PM »

Actually, Haikus have the syllables like this:

5
7
5

No plate like chrome for the hollindaise.

GiftedGirl · « **Reply #6 on:** January 11, 2004, 11:00:13 AM »

Had to test...

Edited by - Markio on 5/6/2004 3:58:38 PM

Super Mario · « **Reply #7 on:** January 12, 2004, 07:07:57 PM »

Castle's gates opened, out

Came Princess Peach, dressed in pink,

The Sun seemed gently brighter.

***

Mario beheld

Her, sky blue eyes lit

Up with emotions.

***

Bowser's jealousy

Stormed, brewing up in his mind.

Mario must lose.

***

Haikus sure are fun,

Does anyone else think so?

Unique idea!

*****************************

Mario`s adventure is over for now, but,

Mario`s dream lives forever...

Dream on, Mario... dream on.

Edited by - Super Mario on 1/12/2004 5:12:53 PM

Peach and Daisy · « **Reply #8 on:** March 07, 2004, 08:02:48 PM »

Mario had one
more chance at winning the next
contest but had died.

I'll give you a peach if you give me a daisy.

Edited by - Peach and Daisy on 3/7/2004 6:03:31 PM

Popple · « **Reply #9 on:** March 08, 2004, 06:37:42 PM »

Toad ate a loaf... bread.
Bread filled with happy and death,
T'was nice to eat loaf.

Childofthepotatoe · « **Reply #10 on:** March 20, 2004, 11:53:03 AM »

I just learned this crap exactly 2 days ago in 2nds period!

5 sillables in line 1
7in line 2
5 in kine three

Toads loaf was very
Good.Boweser came and took
It.toad was ****ed off.

8====D~~~~

Hakuna Matata! What a wonderful phrase! Hakuna Matata! Ain''''t no passin'''' craze! It means "no worries" for the rest of your days! It''''s our problem free philosophy! Hakuna Matata!

Childofthepotatoe · « **Reply #11 on:** March 20, 2004, 11:53:04 AM »

I just learned this crap exactly 2 days ago in 2nds period!

5 sillables in line 1
7in line 2
5 in kine three

Toads loaf was very
Good.Boweser came and took
It.toad was ****ed off.

8====D~~~~

Hakuna Matata! What a wonderful phrase! Hakuna Matata! Ain''''t no passin'''' craze! It means "no worries" for the rest of your days! It''''s our problem free philosophy! Hakuna Matata!

Childofthepotatoe · « **Reply #12 on:** March 20, 2004, 11:55:18 AM »

i rock

Hakuna Matata! What a wonderful phrase! Hakuna Matata! Ain''''t no passin'''' craze! It means "no worries" for the rest of your days! It''''s our problem free philosophy! Hakuna Matata!

Popple · « **Reply #13 on:** March 20, 2004, 12:51:45 PM »

No... you don't rock... at all.

Childofthepotatoe · « **Reply #14 on:** March 21, 2004, 01:46:42 PM »

i have FURY!!!!
--A quote by Fawful

Hakuna Matata! What a wonderful phrase! Hakuna Matata! Ain''''t no passin'''' craze! It means "no worries" for the rest of your days! It''''s our problem free philosophy! Hakuna Matata!