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« Reply #285 on: April 30, 2006, 10:04:03 PM »
Critics are saying, "Marvelous!"  "Tear-jerking!"  "Sapph-tastic!"  "Two thumbs and ten toes up!"  "The greatest and longest cliff hanger I've ever seen!" XD But half of a good story is better than a whole terrible story.  Someone let me know when she finishes this.
(E I): o{D___(--I I): o(D___(o 8(= P)___(=(:  )@)___(3 I)}:O})+)___<( )=(: )) )
The cake is a lie, your base belongs to us, keyboard cat will play you off as you fall out of the bus.

MaxVance

  • Vance Vance Revolution
« Reply #286 on: May 01, 2006, 05:41:03 AM »
For a second, I thought Sapphira had posted a new chapter. Oh well.
Remember that your first Goomba boldly you walk? When Mario touched that mushroom being brought up more largely remember that you are surprised? Miscalculate your jump that pit remember that it falls?

Koopaslaya

  • Kansas
« Reply #287 on: May 01, 2006, 08:30:40 PM »
See the thing is, the end really dosen't exist. Everyone just THINKS it does. It's already over. It's all hush hush, but I felt it necessary to inform you.
Εὐθύνατε τὴν ὁδὸν Κυρίου

Sapphira

  • Inquiring
« Reply #288 on: May 01, 2006, 10:56:27 PM »
>_>
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XD
"The surest way to happiness is to lose yourself in a cause greater than yourself."

« Reply #289 on: May 05, 2006, 10:41:39 PM »
Darn it, Koopaslaya!  You just slayed my day. XC
(E I): o{D___(--I I): o(D___(o 8(= P)___(=(:  )@)___(3 I)}:O})+)___<( )=(: )) )
The cake is a lie, your base belongs to us, keyboard cat will play you off as you fall out of the bus.

« Reply #290 on: May 28, 2006, 11:31:15 PM »
 I am speechless...
This is such a well written story! You've done a very good job with the plot, characters' feelings, and moods. It's such a great tragedy ='( It was truly sad to read how Bowser does... well you know... and Peach ends up dying in the end, but it was so well plotted. You have a very wonderful talent for writing a great story. And don't worry, I'm not rushing you on making your next chapter. I know how it feels to have so much homework in the way. X_x

There were many elements besides the tragedy that I liked. There was the romance between Mario and Peach, a pairing that I will always stick to. (There are so many absurd pairing of Peach out there these days.) The romantic emotions from Mario and Peach gave me a nice warm feeling the I can't really describe right now. XD
There was also the fact that Melony didn't know how she came to be or why her mother died.

So keep up the good work! ^_^ And just to tell you, I have been working on a fan-novel about Princess Peach for about a year. The novel talks about Peach's deepest and darkest secret. (Which I won't tell you until you have finished reading some of my novel.) The novel is called Like You've Never Seen Her Before. It is on some sites, but you don't have to worry; it will come to the Fungi Fourms very soon. ^w^ Oh, and by the way, it's still in the works, like you wonderful story The Prophecy.

Jman

  • Score
« Reply #291 on: May 31, 2006, 09:20:34 PM »
That reminds me...I've got to get back to work on the Revenge of Luigi now that school is done. 
I always figured "Time to tip the scales" was Wario's everyday motto.

The Chef

  • Super
« Reply #292 on: June 01, 2006, 01:46:59 PM »
I remember finding this story on fanfiction.net and reading some of it, but I never found the time to finish. And I still haven't. :'(

MaxVance

  • Vance Vance Revolution
« Reply #293 on: June 03, 2006, 10:04:32 AM »
May... 16... 2003...
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« Last Edit: June 21, 2006, 09:03:32 AM by MaxVance »
Remember that your first Goomba boldly you walk? When Mario touched that mushroom being brought up more largely remember that you are surprised? Miscalculate your jump that pit remember that it falls?

« Reply #294 on: July 07, 2006, 09:30:59 AM »
i just started playing adventurequest the website is  battleon.com but if the prophecy is still goin i have a nice person to add
if u want to find me on runescape...its linkloz01 or royfe02

MaxVance

  • Vance Vance Revolution
« Reply #295 on: July 07, 2006, 04:59:55 PM »
Uh, what? This is a story, not something about abad webgame.
Remember that your first Goomba boldly you walk? When Mario touched that mushroom being brought up more largely remember that you are surprised? Miscalculate your jump that pit remember that it falls?

« Reply #296 on: July 07, 2006, 09:52:02 PM »
Even now, years later, people are still discussing the Prophecy. Wow.
If my son could decimate Lego cities with his genitals, I'd be [darn] proud.

SushieBoy

  • Giddy fangirl
« Reply #297 on: July 07, 2006, 10:22:26 PM »
I don't think it was years, just about a month.
Just because you can, doesn't mean you should.

« Reply #298 on: July 07, 2006, 10:44:36 PM »
If my son could decimate Lego cities with his genitals, I'd be [darn] proud.

SushieBoy

  • Giddy fangirl
« Reply #299 on: July 07, 2006, 11:19:05 PM »
well, you said "disscusing" that mean's talking about the fic. Not Saph posting another chapter.
Just because you can, doesn't mean you should.

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